Jumpoff

[DelinQuent]

eh, bump? anyone else care to listen?

[Tornado]

Hook is catchy for the type of track so no complaints about that, verses were alright, nothing specialbut to me it's just a matter of taste because i can't really critisce your flow or delivery, just your lyrical content but it supposed to be like that and while i may not like it, it's your style so keep it. Like Ax said, don't make it track 1 but i'll still check your album soon

[DelinQuent]

thanks for listening Tornado. i appreciate you giving honest feed without hate even though it's not your style

[Xray]

Damn I forgot about this song, heard it when you posted it but was busy to feed. Anyways flow was perfect I think, didn't fuck up on any points. Lyrics were good, I felt it, it was consistent through out. Delivery was good too man, but damn this would of been hell lot better if you were alot more aggressive on it. Hook was alright, kind of catchy, mixed good too. Not much else to say besides it was good and I liked it. I give it a 7/10 if the delivery was more aggressive would have been 8.5-9/10.

[DelinQuent]

Damn I forgot about this song, heard it when you posted it but was busy to feed. Anyways flow was perfect I think, didn't fuck up on any points. Lyrics were good, I felt it, it was consistent through out. Delivery was good too man, but damn this would of been hell lot better if you were alot more aggressive on it. Hook was alright, kind of catchy, mixed good too. Not much else to say besides it was good and I liked it. I give it a 7/10 if the delivery was more aggressive would have been 8.5-9/10.

thanks for the feed sajjad. i was actually going for a more aggressive delivery on the second half of each verse where the bass kicked in. the first half of each verse i wanted to sound more lazy. thanks again for checking.

[randomghost]

nice beat..good choice.....verse is good...gotta wack style here...nice flow.....hot hook...catchy song....am feelin it...good vibe...nice stuff ma..keep them coming

[DelinQuent]

wack style? lol

[randomghost]

wack style? lol

lol i meant by wack as a crazy different style

[DelinQuent]

wack style? lol

lol i meant by wack as a crazy different style

ohhhh, well thanks lmfao

[randomghost]

wack style? lol

lol i meant by wack as a crazy different style

ohhhh, well thanks lmfao

cheers bro