**Mixtape** C-Riz-One Verse Wonder

[Tash8]

sweet bro! can't wait to listen...

[B.A.D.]

guess who I am
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already listened to this one, excelent stuff

Heads Or Tails
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wow, loving the sample hahaha, sounds real good, you got a very nice beat choice, oh... shame, I didn't like the change.. started real nice... oh... lol... its german hahaha.... don't understand.. haha, but flow is good... lol, at the outro

Monster Wave
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you have a very strange choice of beats hahaha, too upbeat and strange... the verse is good, hmm... lyrics are fire... good short verse

Beat Your Speakers Off
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I'm getting pissed and pissed that you didn't made full tracks lol hahaha... DAMN, the flow on this one is crazy, unique flow!!!... the lyrics are good hahahaha, very impressive man, this beat is good, sounds like a dre production.... truely, beat the speakers off!!... favourite so far

Take Em Out
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oh no.... i hate this beat ... no no no.... hmm... strange, you don't like when I do tracks like this... dunno what to tell you.... irony

Heat Coming
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beat sounds like some mobb deep thing.... crazy, dude, you steped your flow up BIG tyme!!!... also the lyrics are good (again, we most of the times talk about the same thing)... so its strange when you don't like my lyrics smh....
anyways, good track.... hate that it was too short

Real World
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again good choice of beat, hot stuff... but yeah, you got a VERY diferent style for the drum patterns hahaha.... this track sounds like a diss... its hot if it is.... I like the ending part... Welcome To The Real World.... good song man

Talkin Bout You
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THIS IS 4 THE LADIES.... already listened to it, also one of my favourites, love your flow on this one
*listens again*

Destined To shine
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some kanye west shit here.... dude, I am more than impressed on your step up, excelent thing man, "Till the day Ax calls me what???" hmm ???.... your pronunciation is very good on this one
good stuff... hope you wasn't dissing me

Grand Finale
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excelent beat for a finishing track, damn... you got real real good flow man, this is crazy, on the "behind me, and most likely" part it went off really bad... but still I can enjoy your style, really good vybe you bring here

Watch Out
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Spizzy??.... this sounds like was done a while ago, your flow is bad and the mixing too...hmm, I think this is the only track I didn't liked of the album... sounds too weak... dope verse nonetheless

Take Trips
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WOW!!! this is the perfect track for a Big Ax-D collab!!!.... wow... flow is good, damn, you got an excelent new style, switchin flows in a great world... damn.... I feel like lightin up a jay here, wow, another excelent track from you man... sweet beat and you did it excelent, mixing sounds diferent tho', didn't liked how u mixed it here... maybe the volume is too low... damnz, great track

GREAT ALBUM!!!

but short verses =

new c-riz =

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mucho gracias holmes
haha..no i didnt mention your name...." till the day x" like x stands for ANY unknown day...like in math..(for the record i suck at math)...
thank you again Ax

[Tash8]

it's being downloaded, might take a bit to review since it's my last week of school!

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great im still waiting.... ..for a lot since my thread got around 200views

[SajN]

Guess Who I Am

It was dope man! Your delivery is hot, and flow is pretty good. Like the lyrics.


Heads or Tails

Cool sample, no offence, but I've always thought German is funny Sounded good.


Monster Wave

Great beat man! I like your lyrics, I like the Rakim line Pretty nice track, sounded great overall.


Beat Your Speakers Up

Your flow is hot, it sounded kinda club-bangish, but was good. Lyrics were cool.
But I didn't feel the track so much.


Take 'Em Out

Nope, didn't like this. Beat is ... well you know ... And lyrics are aight, I just didn't like the overall feeling. And hook is meh ..


Heat Coming
Very nice flow! Good lyrics. This one I liked. Was the very last endig supposed to be on only left side of the headphones? lol


Real World

The track I've liked most so far, I love the beat. The lyrics are good. And everything is good, and that's why I like it lol.


Talkin' About You

Ladies uh... It was an aight track, not my type. If the ladies like it, then cool lol


Destined To Shine

As Ax said, it sounded like some Kany West shit.
It was an average track. Got nothing to complain on though.


Grand Finale

Good beat, great flow. But same as Destined To Shine, it was just an average track.


Watch Out (Remix)


I like the starting, and the ending. Your lyrics were good, the vibe was good. I liked this style

Take Trips

Neh, It's not my style. Your slow flow is aight, but I just didn't enjoy the track. Maybe cuz I wasn't high lol. The only track I didnt like.



Pretty good mixtape. Short but good.
You've improved very much since last time, so that's cool.

Btw; I know it sounds like I am just repeating when I say "sounds good" etc... but for me it's hard to say a lot when I feed lol, but I say my true and honest opinion.

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its kool sajn...every opinion counts thx for taking the time

[Robbie G]

Just downloaded I'll try to review it soon

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propz ShadyBabie

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oh sick killa i dig what you sayin...yeah slower beats are prolly the best for the beginning...and about my concept..i tried to reach out lol different stuff...so yeah actually i was afraid that my concept will repeat too often..
but thanks again appreciate it man

[Robbie G]

Guess Who I am:
The beginning sample is cool and I like the fast beat and flow. Good song to start off the tape

Heads or Tails:
Sounded good...Just wish I could speak German

Monster Wave:
Catchy ass song...I like the intensity in your voice

Beat Your Speaker:
The song had a cool feel to it. I like how you tried something different. It was certainly catchy but I'm not sure that it has too much replay value for me.

Take 'Em Out:
Beat is sweet. I didn't like the "I take em out I take em out" part at the beginning. It just seemed a little weird. The verse was fire though.

Heat Coming:
Flow was right on the beat, I loved the feel to this. Probably my favorite so far.

Real World:
Didn't really feel the chorus on this. The verse wasn't bad though. Not my favorite track but it was ok.

Talkin about you:
Heh..Nice change of pace. "What you doin here, i got booze in here, wanna screw me here?" Lmao. Flow and beat were nice, for a ladies track I thought this was well done.

Destined to Shine:
I'm not really a fan of your more laid back tracks like this. Your flow wasn't bad on this but it was a little weird and spots and I really noticed your accent on this which made it less listenable. Not a bad track, just not my style.

Grande Finale:
I like your flow on this..it's unique. Not a stand out track but I enjoyed you flow.

Watch out:
I loved the beat and your flow on this. This is a catchy song that I could see myself listening to again. Why did it start off and end in one ear? I didn't like that and it distracted from the song.

Take Trips:
ehhhh....Can't stand that slow of a flow. I guess I can't relate because I don't smoke but it just reminded me of asher roths I love college..

Cool Tape overall...Sorry I can't give you too much specific advice lol. I'm not sure that it was your best but I think your definitely improving overall.

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thank you very much shadybabie...as i said every thought counts

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uppin for feedback

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bump and peace

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last bump i guess