Sticcy Z - Soothe Your Pain

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks man

[B.A.D.]

wow... I actually love the beat, even if its very bad produced, who ever did the beat, had a great idea but didn't caught it well... needs more feel to it... the sample of the hook is great

the mixing is good, needs more precense tho'... sounds only clean... still needs a unique touch to make it sound special, not just good

the lyrics are excelent and I can relate a lot to them.... too much for my taste, hahaha, been livin that too, so I can understand you very very well

only flaw I noticed is the flow, you need to complex it more, sounds too relaxed and since the beat is bad produced it can get off sometimes, but you managed to keep us all in

excelent track man, definitively looking forward to your album

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks ax

[Tornado]

Beat could've bee better especially the hook which sounds corny to me. Lyrics and Concept are good, flow slightly changed throughout the track, could've been smoother but your delivery and how you pronounced certain words, especially the first verse didnt make it as enjoyable as i thought it'd be. Also think you needed abit more emotion as it's a personal track.

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks tornado...though i don't agree about the emotion...there really wasn't much else i could have done..

[Spyder]

dope shit man, i have wandered onto this side on the forum finally and im glad i did that was nice

[<Stiiccy>]

dope shit man, i have wandered onto this side on the forum finally and im glad i did that was nice

thanks man

[Mr. Chambers]

ok going on a feedback marathon

ok.....hmm

i have mixxed feelings on this.....

on one side...i love the content.......its very....i wanna say grimy deep....if that makes any sense lol....i'm guessing your going for a darker vibe...and it kinda gave that feel too me...so you succeeded in that

then theres your delivery........this is where i'm torn.........it sounds nice with the vibe your going for....but in some parts.......it just don't sound right.....that prolly isn't gonna help you much but i have no idea how to explain it....i don't wanna say your forcing it.........but it don't sound natural in some spot.....but i dunno...maybe its just me.......

beat is fucking dope..............

overall a pretty cool song.......

[TripleNineThree]

I could tell you put your emotion behind the lyrics, I could feelin what you were sayin man! The beat was straight, i liked the singing voice on it, it gave a perfect feeling to the type of track you did. You just need to smooth out your flow a TINY bit and it'll be perfect!

Sick Track overall!! keep it up fam!

[TripleNineThree]

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[<Stiiccy>]

thanks for the feed yall...and yeh man ill get you fed in a bit

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked the beat a lot man ,, it's sick really and the chorus is deep ,, you delivery adn flow are nice , but you kinda rap very slow ,, if it was a little bit faster maybe it would be better at least for me ,, but it's perfect either ways ,, good job here sticcz ,, keep it up bro

[lost_angel05]

lol I was curious to see if you were using this beat by the title. Im working on a track with my homie Solo to this instrumental as well. Needless to say I love the beat and the sample.

Song was cool, mixing was really well done. Your vocals were clear. I will agree with others tho it seems your flow wasn't all together at times but nonetheless u did a real nice job on this joint mayne. It was gewd listen. Was actually expectin a third verse but its all good. Holla.

[Emadyville]

Haha I hear this shit start up and it's like wtf, haha me, DelinQuent, and this kid from Maryland I do some songs with collabed on this beat a few weeks back, it's on my myspace called "ease my pain", anyway, thought that was funny when I heard this shit start.

I liked your lyrics in the first verse, thought the rick ross thing was a little eh but whatever, verse was dope, flow was pretty nice. Second verse the flow changed a bit and that kinda threw it off, and I thought your first verse outshined your first by a lot, altho you ended the second verse pretty dope I liked that. The only thing I didn't really like on the track was your delivery sounded so monotoned throughout the song like there was no emotion beyond that limit ya know? i hope that made sense, and I thought you should talked in the background of the hook and in the beginning, knowing how we recorded over this beat I just think it keeps you focused on the song cause the hook by itself I found myself kinda zoning out. Overall I liked it but there are a lot more songs I like better than this from you

Btw def should throw a third verse on there too man!

[Vettori]

Hmm, This is by far the best Delivery Ive heard from you. Although Ive always disliked that Choice of voice your Using. Wish you could do something More Smooth Sounding, could Sound better i think. Ive heard the beat before. And it's a good one