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Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby DelinQuent » Jun 10th, '09, 17:32

flow needs work man, it's different on every line. liked the word play on booty lmfao

chorus is decent, sounds very old school.

delivery is much better on this verse, flow is still needing work. lyrics on both verses are decent, end of the second verse was weak though.

kez, your delivery is super weak. you sound bored, and i'm bored listening to you. however, your flow is real nice, rhyming and lyrics are also good.

overall, a decent track, won't listen a second time due to annon's flow and kez's boring delivery.
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Kez » Jun 10th, '09, 21:53

DelinQuent wrote:flow needs work man, it's different on every line. liked the word play on booty lmfao

chorus is decent, sounds very old school.

delivery is much better on this verse, flow is still needing work. lyrics on both verses are decent, end of the second verse was weak though.

kez, your delivery is super weak. you sound bored, and i'm bored listening to you. however, your flow is real nice, rhyming and lyrics are also good.

overall, a decent track, won't listen a second time due to annon's flow and kez's boring delivery.


Well shit, shame the delivery sounded boring; i was trying to go for a sing-song kind of delivery, it's just what the beat brought out in me.

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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Emadyville » Jun 12th, '09, 04:09

I gotta agree with a lot of people said on that anon you sounded like you had a mouth full of food when you recorded this, the delivery was decent and the flow wasn't too great. The lyrics were nice but like someone said you sound like em, and whether you said its unfair or not, when you say things that we would hear from em then it's not unfair it's the truth basically, and thats what i thought when i listened to this, not sure how you can change that but I still liked your verses. Hook was nice, old school feel like people said, i enjoyed it.

Kez I thought your flow was pretty flawless on this, your lyrics were real good, and though I could see how people said your delivery wasn't there, I understand what you were trying to do, and honestly when I listened I enjoyed your delivery a great deal. very good from you :y:

Overall I would only want to listen to Kez's verse on this, but anon you're def improving, just keep working hard :y: :y:
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Tornado » Jun 12th, '09, 12:58

Good catchy song, but could've been fixed, Anon, both of the verses was on point with the flow as it could be, and delivery should've been more agressive though you're good lyricst even if it is Eminem-like.
Kez, i see you wanted a calmer, laid back approach but just think there wasn't enought emotion otherwise i love the fucing verse. Like the old school feel of the track especially with the mixing, defenite replay value
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby MC Anonymous » Jun 12th, '09, 13:19

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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Wreck » Jun 25th, '09, 08:26

This shit was really nice.

Anon- you're getting better with the flow man...just keep working at it. i had the same problem. great lyricists have to develop the flow first, in our 2 situations, so don't give up. Your lyrics were really nice. The song did have a Em vibe to it/reminded me of an Eminem song, but I would say in a good way it resembled sounding like an Eminem song. Your delivery was nice and raw, no major problems on that.

Kez- flow- very good, lyrics were really nice, delivery wasn't bad, overall verse- real good Kez, nice job.

Hook was catchy and had a crazy, old school but fucked up in a good way feel to it, I really liked the flow

Verses were really nice, the pigeon holding you down in this one is Anon- your flow, but besides that, I really liked the track & thought it was dope.

Beat was extremely dope....Anon, did you produce it?? Good job if so.
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jun 29th, '09, 17:01

ok....
i'ma be honest....i wasn't really feeling your verses.......your flow is too choppy......and your delivery....isn't really that good.......like to me it seems like your trying to hard for emotion or some shit..and i went through the same shit.......just lets yourself relax on the mic....and a delivery that reflects yourself will come......don't try forcing something that shouldn't be...don't be trying to be some1 else.......


2nd guy....flow was cool....a lil rushed @ times but wasn't bad...lyrics were cool......delivery was alright

wasn't really feeling the chorus.....but i dunno..........it wasn't that bad

track was ok overall........Kez def saved the track tho..............
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Enimee » Jul 12th, '09, 22:17

i reeeeaallly enjoyed that track twas omnipresent of early eminem and mixed with icp very entertaining to say the least, kez you have been a fav. of mine for a while and you just keep gettin better, same with you anon ...the track was good i liked the sfx and the beat fit the lyrical content, would have liked to see a more animated chorus it just seemed to simple for what you guys were doing, it was good nonetheless though but if i had to pick something for yall to work on it'd be teh hook but otherwise that shit was on point like i said i reeally enjoyed nice work you two
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Re: Who Would Have Thought; Feat. Kez [SINGLE]

Postby Wreck » Jul 13th, '09, 00:22

Anon, where you at homie? I'v been trying to get ahold of you. Hit me up on here or PM.
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