STFU pt. 3

[Mr. Chambers]

mine FTW....................just joshing........maybe

[Steve Spag]

Not bad....sounds like you're bored when you're rapping though.

Keep it up!

[Mr. Chambers]

Don't Sign Me Vol. 1 is dropping 10/27..........i don't got a track list yet..........

but i do got a cover (shouts to solace!)

[gutawafang]

Don't Sign Me Vol. 1 is dropping 10/27..........i don't got a track list yet..........

but i do got a cover (shouts to solace!)

Looking forward homie. Definitely will check it out man.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

could of sworn that i gave feed..anywayz
sajjad was right about the "you doesnt sound confident" part...idk words just didnt convince me
...flow was extended to the most lol...but worked..
nice lil track...not ur best tho

plus chambers goin against Snowgoons and R.A The Rugged Man shiiiiiit
[release date]

[mcZu]

Loved the flow, delivery is dope as well, though I gotta co-sign what Spag said, you do sound bored at some spots. Lyrics are dope and overal it's an enjoyable song, keep it up.

[Mr. Chambers]

^good looks....yea i need to try to fix that boring shit...its something hear @ times with the type of delivery i usually have

but yea..i ain't dropping the tape tomorrow....got a set back out my control....but my quality will be better after

[Steve Spag]

^good looks....yea i need to try to fix that boring shit...its something hear @ times with the type of delivery i usually have

It comes with time man, don't worry about it; The more you record the more comfortable you'll feel!

[Mr. Chambers]

i'm monthly comfy...had a great winter spring and summer...you know i'ma have a great fall like humpty dumpty.....


goodl ooks for all opinions........

[EminemIVLife]

I have to be honest here: those verses were too golden for that chorus. Those verses were too dope and they made ur chorus sound whiny which was a pity. ie: Flow and Lyrics: Dope as hell. Hook: Whiny as fuck and not something i want 2 hear when i am smoked up

[EminemIVLife]

And obviously the production... and u really said such cool shit at the right times

but that chorus

[Mr. Chambers]

^good looks.......the rest of the story is gonna be like what lupe did...intertwining a story throughout his album......
but yes.....i'm honestly not great @ hooks......it was never my thing and i don't liek them...but i'm trying to improve so good looks on the honesty.....i appreciate it......

[OFFiCiAL JAE ROCK]

[_Ironic_]

heres my feed--

Production wise, this is really hot..Sinima was crucial on this beat. Chorus was HOT..like super HOT..very catchy, usually the tracks on this site really lack with chorus's...but this was likeable and worth a few listens.

verse 1) I was diggin the flow, I was liking the delivery, you pretty much had me noddin my head, so big ups to that..definitely in the top 3 I've heard on this site, so again big ups on that. lyrics wise again this were way above par, I feel like you really couldn't have done much better

again chorus) still hot, doubt I could sick of it unless I had it on replay like 10x, so yeah u get mad point on the hook for sure

verse 2) I was liking the direction this was going, and then it just stopped, and it left me wanting more...I used to do that with my music ALL the time...I'd just stop the beat the beat right after I was done with my verse to make people feel like needed to hear it again...it's a good ploy and it works, alot of ppl used to bitch at me for it though cuz they always wanted to hear the chorus again or another verse and whatnot..but I knew what u were goin for..and it worked..I listened to the track again

overall 9.5/10 one of the most enjoyable tracks I've heard released on this site. I think it's only like the 2nd or 3rd song I've heard from u, but I'll look out for your future releases. stay up.