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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 14th, '10, 05:10

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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby gutawafang » Jan 14th, '10, 05:13

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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby i4ill » Jan 14th, '10, 08:50

that shit was sweet to the ears...
Flow was solid, really solid. Delivery was nice, you got a nice musical attitude. The rhyme schemes was dope in the first verse, it's so old school, that's definitely a plus. Hook was smart, 5 stars on that.
Lyrics were sweet and the beat is just amazing...
Only thing I might recommend is to use more multies to add more to complexity...:)
But for real, this was dope, 8.5 out of 10.
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 14th, '10, 10:30

i4ill wrote:that shit was sweet to the ears...
Flow was solid, really solid. Delivery was nice, you got a nice musical attitude. The rhyme schemes was dope in the first verse, it's so old school, that's definitely a plus. Hook was smart, 5 stars on that.
Lyrics were sweet and the beat is just amazing...
Only thing I might recommend is to use more multies to add more to complexity...:)
But for real, this was dope, 8.5 out of 10.


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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 14th, '10, 12:44

DAAAYYYYYYYYMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
when i heard the beat i was like...is this is a BIG AX record?! :unsure:
but when you spit that shit, i was like holy fuck,this shit is special,lol
the rhymes were tight, i agree with sajjad, some words were SLIGHTLY slurred or mispronounced BUT it doesnt matter,that track was awesome
the hook is straight fiyah, lol it takes alot of balls to be singin like that homie :worship:
That was sick :b:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 15th, '10, 01:56

Arabian Shady wrote:DAAAYYYYYYYYMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
when i heard the beat i was like...is this is a BIG AX record?! :unsure:
but when you spit that shit, i was like holy fuck,this shit is special,lol
the rhymes were tight, i agree with sajjad, some words were SLIGHTLY slurred or mispronounced BUT it doesnt matter,that track was awesome
the hook is straight fiyah, lol it takes alot of balls to be singin like that homie :worship:
That was sick :b:


word hahahaha, thanks a lot man, Im really glad you enjoyed it :worship: :worship: :worship:
come back soon to te Audio Stage for more music from me hahaha

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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jan 15th, '10, 02:21

flows dope, concept is sick, real different from you man, funny light-hearted real nice man, enjoyed the track, first verse was best like how you sticked to the same rhyme :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 16th, '10, 05:22

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:flows dope, concept is sick, real different from you man, funny light-hearted real nice man, enjoyed the track, first verse was best like how you sticked to the same rhyme :y:


hahaha, word, I appreciate that bar... thanks man :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby Mr. Chambers » Jan 16th, '10, 05:54

ok beat

i have mixxed feelings on it...i liek it yet i hate it....the piano sounds too simple..but yet it does...so i dunno how to rate it

chorus is by far the highlight of this song.....very catchy and bouncy

the verses was cool...flow was shakey......delivery was good...and the content was pretty good.....

overall not a bad song..it helped make me enjoy the beat more.....
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby Vettori » Jan 16th, '10, 16:49

Chorus was interesting...Was a funny song...definatly can tell ur experimenting.. You fucked up the ending of verse two.. too many words, sounded crammed together.. with you i noticed it's a few flaws here n there..youve got alot of it figured out. Just take more time to perfect ur verses. And with the chorus i think the ending was wierd...but i enjoyed alot how it began

Funny song man

wish it had more humor tho for the type of song it was, the odd time words didnt rhyme so it was almost interupted.

Beat was sick, Was Bumpin.. Made it work
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 17th, '10, 04:59

thanks a lot for the comments, vet & chambers... greatly appreciated, Im glad you enjoyed it

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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby Tornado » Jan 17th, '10, 15:45

Hmm, i see this is a light humoured observation on Tr, so it's a cool subject to talk to. Beat i'm in two minds about. I mean the piano melody is sick and nice drums but the strings don't sound right to me and i dion#'t really see the beat as kinda light hearted, it's more meanacing. Your verses were alright but you did slur your words and some words you did pronounce weird aswel. flow was on for the most part though it did get stretched at times. everything else was alright but chorus was the best part and c lear and catchy and also good to see you had fun on it. good mixing aswell on the track. 7/10
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby SajN » Jan 17th, '10, 16:01

You pronounced my name Fahad Sajid and the word Norwegian wrong :laughing:

Verses are good man, some words were unclear. Dope flow.
The chrorus was very nice! I dig it.

Nice man :worship:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 18th, '10, 05:28

Tornado wrote:Hmm, i see this is a light humoured observation on Tr, so it's a cool subject to talk to. Beat i'm in two minds about. I mean the piano melody is sick and nice drums but the strings don't sound right to me and i dion#'t really see the beat as kinda light hearted, it's more meanacing. Your verses were alright but you did slur your words and some words you did pronounce weird aswel. flow was on for the most part though it did get stretched at times. everything else was alright but chorus was the best part and c lear and catchy and also good to see you had fun on it. good mixing aswell on the track. 7/10


yeah, Im still workin on the slurring issue, lol... but Ill keep workin on that as a priority.. thanks for the observations and feed man, greatly appreciated :worship: :worship: :worship:

SajN wrote:You pronounced my name Fahad Sajid and the word Norwegian wrong :laughing:

Verses are good man, some words were unclear. Dope flow.
The chrorus was very nice! I dig it.

Nice man :worship:


lol, I'd never pronounced em before, so i went on how I though they were
good that you took it in a good way (it was not entirely made to be taken that way), but I did not mean any personal attack, just a general point of view of the site aiming at the admin group.

but thanks for listening and leaving your comments on it :y: :y:
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Re: Big Ax-D - Bacon & Cheese

Postby Life Rise » Jan 23rd, '10, 12:04

Hey man, not a massive fan of the beat but you worked well with it. I liked how the track was a little bit different than standard. Flow was sweet, maybe the delivery could be a little better in places but nice work overall man :y:
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