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Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
i4ill wrote:that shit was sweet to the ears...
Flow was solid, really solid. Delivery was nice, you got a nice musical attitude. The rhyme schemes was dope in the first verse, it's so old school, that's definitely a plus. Hook was smart, 5 stars on that.
Lyrics were sweet and the beat is just amazing...
Only thing I might recommend is to use more multies to add more to complexity...
But for real, this was dope, 8.5 out of 10.
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Arabian Shady wrote:DAAAYYYYYYYYMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
when i heard the beat i was like...is this is a BIG AX record?!![]()
but when you spit that shit, i was like holy fuck,this shit is special,lol
the rhymes were tight, i agree with sajjad, some words were SLIGHTLY slurred or mispronounced BUT it doesnt matter,that track was awesome
the hook is straight fiyah, lol it takes alot of balls to be singin like that homie![]()
That was sick
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:flows dope, concept is sick, real different from you man, funny light-hearted real nice man, enjoyed the track, first verse was best like how you sticked to the same rhyme
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Tornado wrote:Hmm, i see this is a light humoured observation on Tr, so it's a cool subject to talk to. Beat i'm in two minds about. I mean the piano melody is sick and nice drums but the strings don't sound right to me and i dion#'t really see the beat as kinda light hearted, it's more meanacing. Your verses were alright but you did slur your words and some words you did pronounce weird aswel. flow was on for the most part though it did get stretched at times. everything else was alright but chorus was the best part and c lear and catchy and also good to see you had fun on it. good mixing aswell on the track. 7/10
SajN wrote:You pronounced my name Fahad Sajid and the word Norwegian wrong![]()
Verses are good man, some words were unclear. Dope flow.
The chrorus was very nice! I dig it.
Nice man
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
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