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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby gutawafang » Mar 16th, '10, 07:46

The volume of everything, I don't see no problems man. :y:

The lyrics is quite good. I think certain lines require better multis.

The chorus is the usual Big Ax-D shit. I don't really like the chorus man.

But overall, the beat is the most outstanding thing here. Really, the beat is amazing man. :worship:
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby Tranquil » Mar 16th, '10, 11:52

already told ya man, its dope :smoking:
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 17th, '10, 09:05

Thank yous thank yous thank yous

many thank yous hahaha

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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 17th, '10, 13:57

mmmmmmm,, i think ,, it will be so dope .. if adlib were a litte bit better,,, cuz i guess, they jus ruined it especially in the 2nd verse,, really man fix that ,, ,, they jus sound annoying ,, apart from that ,, lyrics,, were sick ,, your delivery is dope ,,, in all verses,, mixing was pro ,, really ,, and ya the beat is ,, tight AX-d,,, nice one bro ,,,, and yeah ,, i loved the chorus ,,, it's dope... so try to play with the volume of the adlib ,, add echo ,, just to make em ,fit in da song ,, 8.5/10 ,,, keeeeep it up ,, bro ,,, i love your music :wave:
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 18th, '10, 06:49

Thank you Slim Zaddy... thanks for sharing your thoughts

I will not make the adlib mistake any longer, Im glad I could get some good feed out of this song which is going to help me out in the future

Thanks for all youre support :worship:
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby Kez » Mar 18th, '10, 19:15

Finally i can reply to this now that TR's actually working

The beat is again genius, didn't think i'd like it but you rode it well.
Hook is great and kept me comin back to listen
The flow is nuts as well, had me bumpin to it
Some great lines in this too

I'd break it down further but put it this way, i bumped to it and i kept comin back to listen to it so yeah basically, great track :b: lol
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby BILI » Mar 18th, '10, 22:26

Amazing dude...I really love everything you put out...hook is fuckin :worship: :worship:
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 20th, '10, 04:17

thanks a lot kez & Bili, Glad you liked it :worship: :worship: :worship:

thanks to everyone again for the comments, a lot of usefull things I got from you on this one

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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby Jaz » Mar 21st, '10, 10:16

As soon as the beat started I had a feeling I was going to like it, and I did. I'm not a huge fan of your accent (no offense :D ), and the rhyme scheme was kinda basic, but you delivered well. The beat is definitely my favorite part though.
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby JBM » Mar 22nd, '10, 06:02

The beats cool. Some parts were a little hard to understand. Didn't like the chorus too much but it had potential.
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 23rd, '10, 06:10

thanks a lot for that feed, Im glad ya'll liked it

@ JBM/// thank you m8, I'll work even better with the accent to avoid that :y:

@ Sii// Lmao, thanks a lot man, that means a lot, I really really appreciate that, plus feels nice to see that you liked it, thanks man :worship: :y:

@ Jaz // hahaha thanks man, if you need beats let me know then :flower: :y: :8)

BTW:... This beat, and all my previous beats are trash compared to what I just learnt to do... Ask Sajjad, he already witnessed my new capability of beat making.

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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby hype » Mar 24th, '10, 12:53

the beginning melody creeped me out :| i was alone in my room and that was just creepy. nice song, i liked the second verse the most. the track has replay value, nice one.
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 26th, '10, 07:16

word? lmfao!!!

thank you for the comment & for listening :y: :flower:
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby Jaz » Apr 1st, '10, 01:22

Before I start, let me say I can never wrap my head around foreign accents, so that's probably taking away from what I have to say about this.

The verses are pretty straight despite a slight language barrier. The hook I'm not really a fan of. Also did you produce this yourself? The beat is pretty simple, but it fits this song sooo perfectly.. That's probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Anyway, I'm not really a fan of the song as a whole, but the beat like I said is perfect for the song, and the verses are alright.
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Re: BIG AX-D - WoNdErLaNd

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 13th, '10, 10:11

Jaz wrote:Before I start, let me say I can never wrap my head around foreign accents, so that's probably taking away from what I have to say about this.

The verses are pretty straight despite a slight language barrier. The hook I'm not really a fan of. Also did you produce this yourself? The beat is pretty simple, but it fits this song sooo perfectly.. That's probably my favorite aspect of the song.

Anyway, I'm not really a fan of the song as a whole, but the beat like I said is perfect for the song, and the verses are alright.


thanks for listenin bruv, I appreciate that :worship: :worship:
I did the beat, so anytime u want one like this, holla :y:
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