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Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 18th, '10, 23:20

Jay-19 wrote:Vettori is nice, heard way better from him though, but he still did really good.
Hook is cool, nothing special to me though, but it did it's job.

Tash, your vocals seem very low compared to Vet's, should raise that in my opinion.
Like your flow man, and this is something different from what I've heard from you before.
Good job.


Overall, tight track! :b:

My thoughts exactly!
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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Vettori » Apr 18th, '10, 23:24

Thanks to everyone who left some feedback. Was a fun track to record :D in the mean time, i gotta Smoke a bowl, and get to the next song.

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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Tash8 » Apr 19th, '10, 19:58

thx guys
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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby B.A.D. » Apr 20th, '10, 07:58

damn vettori did fire on his verse, but I mean... extreme fire, dear lord it was amazing haha, but the hook... I felt like listening to Eminem 100%... like no way to distinguish you from him. even if the hook is actually really good, it sounds like a copy or imitation. thats just my opinion tho. (like you gave a fuck, anyways). but your verse was really really good.

Tash, I think you brought the song an extreme step down, your mixing was terrible compared to his, you might have even done the same sequence of events but the quality wasnt there. that intro thingy u did after the hook also was kinda bad, dont like it. youre lyrics were awsome, very good writing but the performance was below your average, where was the emotion?

overall = :y:

keep at it
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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Tornado » Apr 20th, '10, 15:18

Vettori's verse and chorus were excellent, can't complain

Hmm..your verse sounded abit thin, maybe needed another layer and i don't think the mixing was the best ither but shit was alright, listenable but it did bring down the track, Everything else was alright but i'd say its a 7/10
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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Tash8 » Apr 20th, '10, 16:18

it's wat happens when you have to remix and master your verse 10 times cause shit keeps changing

anyways it's w.e
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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Steve Spag » Apr 20th, '10, 17:40

Tash8 wrote:it's wat happens when you have to remix and master your verse 10 times cause shit keeps changing

anyways it's w.e

it's okay man, you spit a really hot verse and i think it sounds great! i personally like yours better than vet's (no offence vet) because you've improved your game big time recently and your vocals are sounding better and better with each track....keep it up dude!
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Re: Just a Man With a Flaw - Vettori & Tash

Postby Pllumi » Apr 20th, '10, 23:49

wow, dope shit :worship:
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