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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Le Tunisien » May 15th, '10, 23:15

Tash8 wrote:
le tunisien wrote:the hook was


you lose your train of thought? :D

oh my god my bad...this is startin to happen to me more and more like wtf am i on

well...the hook was Ok...the oh oh oh thing was kinda corny though but it was ok nothin amazin though
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Solace » May 16th, '10, 05:23

Tash8 wrote:
le tunisien wrote:the hook was


you lose your train of thought? :D

:laughing:


Quite enjoyed it, hook is meh...But niice verses!
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby BabyBLue91 » May 16th, '10, 06:29

Not bad tash.. nice lyrics :) I think its your hooks that make songs so catchy. grrrr.. after I listened to it, I couldnt get that part out of my head !! Oh OH Ohhhh.. lol
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby GibbzyTrShady » May 16th, '10, 11:55

Very Catchy Lovin the production an lyrics pretty decent drop :happy: !!!

rtf on my drop please one love
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '10, 19:53

thanks guys :sweating:

GibbzyTrShady wrote:rtf on my drop please one love


of course
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby GoodGirlsGetGutted » May 16th, '10, 20:03

I'm not gonna lie, I fucking hate rap.
I hate this poppy shit too.
The chorus is indescribably annoying.
The lyrics and flow are excellent, but I would never willingly listen to anything like this.
Unobjectively, however, it's probably a solid 8.5/10 and a great track.
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tash8 » May 16th, '10, 20:19

GoodGirlsGetGutted wrote:I'm not gonna lie, I fucking hate rap.
I hate this poppy shit too.
The chorus is indescribably annoying.
The lyrics and flow are excellent, but I would never willingly listen to anything like this.
Unobjectively, however, it's probably a solid 8.5/10 and a great track.


haha I'm sorry man... If you want to be successful you got to learn to be able to appeal to the mass, even if I don't necessarily like it myself. I made an attempt to add some solid lyricism to the fold and hoped that I would gain some of the pop haters back, but I guess it doesn't work for everyone.
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Robbie G » May 16th, '10, 23:26

Great song, loved the chorus and the flow. The only thing holding back my enjoyment of it is the quality. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't great.

Keep it up dude. :y:
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tash8 » May 17th, '10, 07:08

Robbie G wrote:Great song, loved the chorus and the flow. The only thing holding back my enjoyment of it is the quality. It wasn't bad, but it wasn't great.

Keep it up dude. :y:


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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » May 17th, '10, 20:10

ahhh, your finally having fun with you flow man, like were you try different things and arent just trying to stay on beat, once you got that is when you know your getting dope lol

loving the lyrics and overall feeling of the track, your flow is what im really loving though.

the hook is really good, your always creative with them, nice blend of rapping/harmony/singing on there.

you also got a really distinct delivery on this aswell man, great track :y:
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tornado » May 18th, '10, 11:17

Bad Beat first off, really unclear and unkind to your voice, made it harder for me to hear, although i feel the quality you record with isn't that great either. Chorus is alright, probably better if someone else sang it but hey, you held the tune. Flow and the first 2 verses were solid though it caught me by suprise as they didn't finish at the end of the 16 bar, like the 2nd one finsihed on the 15th and i thought it wouildnt just jump to the chourus. Also, when you didn't end some lines with rhymes felt weird in some places.
Also, i thought anything after the 2nd verse/chorus was unneeded, especially the the verse/bridge/whatever you wanna call it.

I would give this a 4/10
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tash8 » May 18th, '10, 15:57

Tornado wrote:Bad Beat first off, really unclear and unkind to your voice, made it harder for me to hear, although i feel the quality you record with isn't that great either. Chorus is alright, probably better if someone else sang it but hey, you held the tune. Flow and the first 2 verses were solid though it caught me by suprise as they didn't finish at the end of the 16 bar, like the 2nd one finsihed on the 15th and i thought it wouildnt just jump to the chourus. Also, when you didn't end some lines with rhymes felt weird in some places.
Also, i thought anything after the 2nd verse/chorus was unneeded, especially the the verse/bridge/whatever you wanna call it.

I would give this a 4/10


really? s'all good.
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Mr. Chambers » May 19th, '10, 14:45

one of your better tracks.....the flow, tho on some bars was choppy...was relatively good...delivery was pretty good...and lyrics were prolly the best i seen you compose......chorus was alright.....the last two bars i didn't like much but it was alright"


the only thing i can think for you to improve on...is sometimes you get like a bounce slow down flow thing going on....and it's kinda "amateur" mc like......kinda makes the flow less tolerable......but other then that not a bad song
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tash8 » May 21st, '10, 17:04

thanks chambers!
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Re: Only One Thing - Tash8

Postby Tash8 » May 24th, '10, 02:25

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