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Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby Yah-hah » Jul 13th, '10, 10:08

Yeah I dont know much about the beats and the mixing but lyrically it was dope, very clear delivery and the deep vioce gives a nice touch. Hot track though homie keep bringin that shit :y:
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"Red hand I use to reach deep in my dark quiver,
Arrow so big the fuckin bones in ya arm splinter
Fuckin crazy I'll stick my hand throgh ya hearts center,
With sharp scissors the words Native Pride gets carved in her,
"-Yah-hah

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Your life is cool bro lol :y:


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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby ahckiryL » Jul 13th, '10, 13:31

U sound like Iron solomon does on his song with Illmac called Fear Itself...flow was crazy and liked the first verse part with the atonement part and all that...second verse was ok but at the end u ended it on a better note then u started...third verse was cool to, steady flow through out that and multi's were on point...emotion was there kinda monotone most of the time and all that but ur flow was the highlight for me...hook i wasnt really feelin tho, that part to me could of been better but other than that it was good homie...Keep doin ur thang 1

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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby Jaz » Jul 14th, '10, 18:46

Thanks you guys


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Word? Means a lot fam.. and about your PM, I'll see what I can do.
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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby classthe_king » Jul 14th, '10, 18:48

Why does it seem like every thread at shadowville is an open collab thread
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby Jaz » Jul 14th, '10, 18:49

classthe_king wrote:Why does it seem like every thread at shadowville is an open collab thread


Haha we do seem to get an abnormal number of those there.. idk..
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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby classthe_king » Jul 14th, '10, 18:51

Jaz wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Why does it seem like every thread at shadowville is an open collab thread


Haha we do seem to get an abnormal number of those there.. idk..


Haha yeah, I've been floatin around there giving feed the last couple of days.
You think your personal attacks make up for what you lack?
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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 14th, '10, 19:51

I liked that a lot man!

Your flow is ridiculous, especially on the first verse!
And that multi-type-of-shit you had going in the end of the 1st was incredible to me! :b:
Lyrics are tight.

The first part of the hook is really good, but the last two lines kinda messes it up. Maybe if you kept the flow you had on the two first and used it on the two last? Nahmsayin'?

Overall, really dope track dude! :b:
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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby Jaz » Jul 15th, '10, 09:22

Thanks Jay, and to rhyme, I'll see what I can do about your message.
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Re: Jaz: "Darkest Before Dawn"

Postby Jaz » Aug 23rd, '10, 22:51

bump from deep on page 2.


My mic should be back in action within the next week or so I think.. So be on the lookout for some more new shit!
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