D. Dubs (Emadyville) "What Am I Gunna Do?"

[Emadyville]

thanks a sinide, dr3, zu, and jay


The rouygh draft I did of this my delivery went a lot stronger, but my voice was higher than I wanted it, so when I redid it I took it down a little and I guess that ended up being a bad thing.

I don't know all that much about mixing, pretty much the basics, but I know Tash talked to me about layering before, so I'm gunna talk to him about how to do it.

Thank you all again for taking the time

[classthe_king]

Bout time you dropped something.

This was dope dude, I really liked it

[Robbie G]

That was great. I liked the content and the lyrics were good.

Drop more often man.

[Jay-19]

thanks a sinide, dr3, zu, and jay


The rouygh draft I did of this my delivery went a lot stronger, but my voice was higher than I wanted it, so when I redid it I took it down a little and I guess that ended up being a bad thing.

I don't know all that much about mixing, pretty much the basics, but I know Tash talked to me about layering before, so I'm gunna talk to him about how to do it.

Thank you all again for taking the time

I can give you some advice if you want to?
I'm layering my shit all the time man.

[macdaddy019967]

sick song and i like the chorus

just work on the delivery a bit more

[macdaddy019967]

3rd verse is best

[Emadyville]

I can give you some advice if you want to?
I'm layering my shit all the time man.

yeah man send me a pm if you don't mind



and thanks class, robbie, and macdizzle

[Terry_M]

The beat was perfect, the lyrics were really on point, flow and delivery can be improved. But overall, that was an enjoyable listen bro. The mixing was done well also.

[B.A.D.]

hahaha, you remind me a lot of Young Zee but in like a corny way.... its dope tho ha

your vocals sound clean but the mixdown of the track needs some adjustments, but its good.

ok, basically what you need to perfect the flow, its good, it flows and all, but its not interesting.
the lyrics are ok, fit this song perfectly, but you need to up the vocab... literrally the words you say are to simple you know?... the multi's are great, metas are good, u know how to do this, but a little more vocab and nameplay complexity can add a spark to it, not to exagerated, but enough to be noticeable.

other than that, keep at it, great track

[Emadyville]

Thanks a lot Ax, I really appreciate it, and I'll def try and work on that shit

[Xray]

Your lyrics on this, have an old school flow, I like it.

But it didn't work with this beat imo. The beat sounds way too happy sounding, it's not a rap beat imo. This beat makes your delivery sound very weird, sounds like some necessary rhymes type shit, delivery wise and beat wise. Flow was choppy because of this beat. Basically I don't fault anything you did, except for choosin that beat. Bad beat man. Didn't like it sorry man.

Return feed?
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[Steve Spag]

Holy shit...this is pretty sick man!
The beat/hook is really amazing, and your lyrics/flow/voice seem to match it PERFECTLY. Easily one of your sickest tracks, this is really bumpable! Subject matter is really relatable, so this is gonna have a high-replay value for me anyways, lol. Keep it up man!

Please check out my newest track aswell and let me know what you think bro!
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=93070&hilit=spag

For real, this is gotta be one of the best tracks from this year to be posted on this site. Really impressed!

[Emadyville]

Your lyrics on this, have an old school flow, I like it.

But it didn't work with this beat imo. The beat sounds way too happy sounding, it's not a rap beat imo. This beat makes your delivery sound very weird, sounds like some necessary rhymes type shit, delivery wise and beat wise. Flow was choppy because of this beat. Basically I don't fault anything you did, except for choosin that beat. Bad beat man. Didn't like it sorry man.

Return feed?
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=94878

I will tonight, and thanks for the feed

and thanks Spag, thanks for the pm about it too, I'll feed your song tonight as well

[Tash8]

like I said, I like this track...

I kinda disagree with people saying you're flow was choppy. Its not choppy as much as just chopped up...you purposely did it that way, and to my ear, I could keep up with it. I understand how some might not.

Either way, I like this track, great job!

[Emadyville]

oh shit, i didnt know u did audio lol.

this was dope man great lyrics and flow.


where can i find more of your work?

I sent you a pm, and thanks for the feed.

And tash, thanks again