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Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Xray » Aug 7th, '10, 06:40

Glad you guys liked. I haven't seen you feed my shit Kez for ages, nice to see you back in my threads bro. :wave:

Thanks for the feed guys.
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Jay-19 » Aug 7th, '10, 15:08

Blam!
This shit goes hard man!

Flow is fucking ridiculous Saj, and the rhyming is nuts!
Droppin' heat every time bro!
Mixing is sweeeeeet!

Hook is raw as hell, lovin' it!

Tash, improving like fuck by every track I hear from you man.
Flow is really dope man. You mix well with Saj on this track!

Good job guys! :b:
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Peace_Maker » Aug 7th, '10, 15:17

I would do unholy things to have your flow, delivery, and voice.
Your brain is child's play to manipulate.
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 7th, '10, 16:56

Pretty decent track. Lyrics are sick but your flow/voice on this sounds more slurred than normal. Beat is pretty dope though, I'm diggin' the dark feel to it. Tash, you keep impressing me on how fast you're improving your voice/flow, keep that shit up!
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Aug 7th, '10, 16:56

dope as fuck, loving the beats aswell sajjad, sick track will be bumping this :smoking:
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby -Dee- » Aug 7th, '10, 19:26

Sick track man, loving the beat on it too.
Only part that could be improved a bit is the singing parts. :)
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Xray » Aug 7th, '10, 22:36

Thanks guys.
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Emadyville » Aug 8th, '10, 04:37

Loved your verse xray.

Your delivery was dope, flow was solid and the lyrics as well as the rhymes were real dope. The hook was real good also, it sounded good, loved the slowness to it cause it was just slow enough to offset the verses. I also liked how you used a little melody in the second half of the hook.Only negative feed I have for this is that a few times you rushed words at the beginning of the bar, the most noticable one was when you said "so cold". Other than that I really enjoyed this and it has def replay value.

ANd for tash, I know you sent me your verse on aim so I'm sure I fed you already on this :y:
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Tash8 » Aug 8th, '10, 17:58

thx a bunch for the feed guys

Big Ax-D wrote:methaphorical punches, things like that. either way its an amazing verse and feels nice to my ears :y: :worship:


sorry man but I have to disagree. Maybe you didn't understand the punches but I felt like I had some solid ones.

Rip into her stomach, just to see her lunch

switch her heart with her lungs, now with every inhale she'll be breathing out some blood

I'll come charging at you like a felony

leave you sliced like deli meat

In harmony with satan, we're playing on the same pitch and melody

Pissing on these bitches, I even got R.Kelly beat.

Fuck it, that's all I came to do
Shatter pussies and I'm aimming straight at you.

Shove a flute down your mouth, while I'm yelling Pipe Down


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sorry I had to do it, cause I felt this was easily one of my most punch filled verses, maybe you didn't catch them, but it's cool

thx again guys
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Steve Spag » Aug 8th, '10, 18:04

^^
Yeah, those punches are REALLY nice!
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby classthe_king » Aug 8th, '10, 20:13

Sorry but none of those punches were that good :unsure:
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Xray » Aug 9th, '10, 09:08

classthe_king wrote:Sorry but none of those punches were that good :unsure:

Stop showing off bitch. :whistle:
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby B.A.D. » Aug 9th, '10, 10:18

Tash8 wrote:thx a bunch for the feed guys

Big Ax-D wrote:methaphorical punches, things like that. either way its an amazing verse and feels nice to my ears :y: :worship:


sorry man but I have to disagree. Maybe you didn't understand the punches but I felt like I had some solid ones.

Rip into her stomach, just to see her lunch

switch her heart with her lungs, now with every inhale she'll be breathing out some blood

I'll come charging at you like a felony

leave you sliced like deli meat

In harmony with satan, we're playing on the same pitch and melody

Pissing on these bitches, I even got R.Kelly beat.

Fuck it, that's all I came to do
Shatter pussies and I'm aimming straight at you.

Shove a flute down your mouth, while I'm yelling Pipe Down


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sorry I had to do it, cause I felt this was easily one of my most punch filled verses, maybe you didn't catch them, but it's cool

thx again guys


no need to get offended, I'm trying to provide feedback for you. but if you dont want it, its ok. this attitude is not gonna help you at all.

yes, I agree with you, those are nice punches, but
look what I said:
Big Ax-D wrote:methaphorical punches, things like that


look at sajjad's for example:

"bringin Freddy Krueger pain
To any kid that came, who would riddle, fiddle my grain
Cause my wheat be little sane, but it's the swivle that let me gain"

"I smoke emcees like Winfields depending where the wind reels
Bringin that May-Weather cause that's when the wind kills"

see the diference?
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Le Tunisien » Aug 9th, '10, 15:08

yo..the beat is dope..you did good as usual sajj flow wise and delivery..very solid..i couldnt understand some parts of your lyrics but its ok ..the hook sounds awesome.. i like that singing part :smoking: and tash you did a good job too..i like your lyrics better maybe cuz they'r easier to understand than xray's...but yeah the song is dope i love it :y: :y: :y:
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Re: Sajjad ft. Tash - Assault (prod by sajjad)

Postby Solace » Aug 9th, '10, 16:25

Xray wrote:
classthe_king wrote:Sorry but none of those punches were that good :unsure:

Stop showing off bitch. :whistle:

But it's true lol, 'cept that flute one is nice. If those are dope..Really? Sliced like Deli Meat? I might as well say On my game like PS3..My rhymes wear you out like clothing..Screw you over without tools...etc.
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