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Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

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Re: Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

Postby Mr. Chambers » Aug 25th, '10, 16:57

first verse tbh...wasn't that good....really boring....flow was choppy as shit.....emotion was kinda blah....coulda made a better build up

2nd verse was pretty good...flow was cool...lyrics were passionate (pause) and delivery was a bit better.

Beat was that shit.,....but i already told you that when you let me listen...not bad tho fam....one of your top 3 songs.........get settled soon and good luck with the move.
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Re: Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

Postby Tash8 » Aug 25th, '10, 23:24

thx for the feed guys
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Re: Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

Postby gutawafang » Aug 26th, '10, 09:24

Nice.

The beat is dope but I somehow feel like the chorus is longer than your verse. HAHAHAHA. Your flow is good here man. :y:
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Re: Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

Postby Tash8 » Aug 30th, '10, 05:21

gutawafang wrote:Nice.

The beat is dope but I somehow feel like the chorus is longer than your verse. HAHAHAHA. Your flow is good here man. :y:


thx bro..yeah the chorus was just as long but I kinda wanted it like that..
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Re: Tash - Impossible (prod by me)..last song for a whilte

Postby Tornado » Aug 30th, '10, 09:33

First off, not liking the beat, especially those 2 claps that come on throughout your verses. It would've been much better if he beat was simple and not commercial. 1st Verse had a coupla slips, some slighty off-flow points for example "The best view I never really thought I'd ever reach heights like these and I wish we'd rewrite these times" i heard something strange. Anyways, 2nd Verse was better, so it was ok but to be honest, the signing takes up most of the track, beat's unenjoyable and it felt like a cheaper version of LTWYL
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