On the production side, this is great shit. The beat sounds kinda weird and poppy at the start but by the end with the drums and the extra stuff it gives it a whole different image. Loved how you ended it too, slowly stripping away the layers to end it with just the beginning melody.
The concept of this song confused me a bit at first because the video with all the wartime video and shit gives it a bit of a conflicting image. Made me think it'd have a political slant, hence when the beat kicked in it sounded surprisingly chirpy.
The lyrics i liked, i mean some of it is stuff you've said before but a lot of it was great. I liked the "when the bitch puts up a fight" line in particular. The imagery of a comet crashing through the hole in the Ozone layer into the ocean was also damn good.
The flow was back and forth for me. On parts like
its just another prayer, something on another layer
someone watch me from above and help me save the city, mayor
its all just so infair, and makes me tear my fucking hair
but I know when both of you are close, I can live in the air
it flowed beautifully, but there were parts where it kinda trailed off and it kinda sounded like it would with an unexperienced beginner realising he's not spaced his lines out properly and he has to take pauses to let the beat come back or have some lines way longer than others and everything. Obviously i know that won't be the case but that's how it sometimes came across to me. Dunno it's probably just cause i read the lyrics while i listened to it.
The delivery was good as usual, once i got over the assumption it would be more sombre because of the video i could appreciate it. Nothing to really fault, everything is perfectly clear and you can still project the emotion. And i liked the melodic parts like the quote above, they complimented the beat very well.
The hook i like, as always your hooks are catchy and fit the beat well.
Overall a damn good track and i can't wait to hear Die a King lol, release that shit
Oh, and sorry it's taken me so long to get around to checkin it, as you know i been very busy
