NEW SPAG - "Sticks & Stones" TR EXCLUSIVE

[Steve Spag]

you have completely changed your style--and I'm saying its not for the better.

Meh, that's just your opinion, lol.

Thanks for reachin' out brosef!

[Tash8]

you have completely changed your style--and I'm saying its not for the better.

Meh, that's just your opinion, lol.

Thanks for reachin' out brosef!

that's why i said
"and I'm saying, it's not for the better."

and you did ask me for your opinion, so it's not like i'm just sticking my nose somewhere it doesn't belong

[Steve Spag]

you have completely changed your style--and I'm saying its not for the better.

Meh, that's just your opinion, lol.

Thanks for reachin' out brosef!

that's why i said
"and I'm saying, it's not for the better."

and you did ask me for your opinion, so it's not like i'm just sticking my nose somewhere it doesn't belong

That's why I said thanks dummy, lol.
I love you Tash haha

[Tash8]

love is mutual

[Steve Spag]

1st Bump!

[Sissy Smirnoff]

Pretty good

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thank You.

[Block]

I love this beat, bro.. Your flow is sick in this. It's really unique. The mixing was real good, sounds kinda airy though, like too heavy on the highs? Hmm.. The hook is repetative but in a good way, I like it. Your emotion is dope and only messes up once or twice in the second verse.

O/a this is one of my favs from you, bro. Good shit, man.

[Mr. Chambers]

beat is pretty fucking epic

Chorus....to be 100% it doesn't even sound like it rhymes at all??? or maybe i'm missing the point

ok i'm just going to give an overall feedback on all the verse cuz they all have the same issue. your delivery just sounds made up. like your trying to just have some rise in your voice so people can't say your monotone, and to me it doesn't work at all....makes you sound like your trying way to hard to make this work...shit needs to come natural

flow was okish...alot of stretched out lines...some go past the hit...better rhyming multi's would help your flow out...but thats for you to decide...

lyrics....well tbh....alot of them sounded really corny....not trying to hate...but that one pepsi rhyme.....it just seemed like you were rhyming random words together....

i heard what you could of did with your style, and i think if you worked a lil harder on it to make it better it could come out pretty dope...but it turned out to only be an average song....thats just my opinion tho....good luck with your meeting

[Steve Spag]

^^
Thanks for the feed man, respect for comin' out and showing some props! I kinda addressed what you were saying about the simplicity in some lines in the other topic response, but I do appreciate your honesty.

And the meeting went great, thanks to everyone for their best wishes!

[Kez]

Alright you guys are probably gonna wonder why i'm bumping lots of old Steve shit with my feed, it's cause he asked me to feed all these tracks over the last few months and i never got time, so i wanna share my thoughts. Ima leave this notice above every single one incase someone misses the message

The beat is fuckin majestic, some real feel-good shit
The hook's dope, you have this kind of voice where you can make your voice real lively and carrying without actually having to like, shout or anything, if you get me, makes the hooks real enjoyable
Your flow sounds kinda similiar to many of your songs, but it works, especially for this kind of beat, a really chilled out song.
The lyrics fit the song perfect lol, talking about drinking Pepsi and spliffs and shit, very chilled out. The lyrics being about some girl who fucked you around but it still manages to be pretty upbeat and hopeful, like you're leavin it behind. Dunno if that's the idea you were going for.
The rhymes especially i think are really great cause they hit pretty hard, like the way you end lines is very powerful, i dunno it's hard to explain but it worked for me lol

This is the kind of track i find hard to dislike, i dunno, it's just easy on the ears. That might sound like bullshit feed to you guys but fuck yall, thats how i feel lol.