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Scrubz - Talk is cheap

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Re: Scrubz - Talk is cheap

Postby _Ironic_ » Mar 28th, '11, 05:49

returnin the feed.


quality is pretty decent...makes it easier to listen to it

first verse...wasn't feelin delivery at all..lyrics are good, I get your message, flow is kinda basic.

chorus wasn't my steez, just doesn't do it's job. a hook should be what makes people wanna replay it...you have the idea down, the pattern and all, but your delivery and emotion just don't go with the track your spittin- just my .02

second verse better delivery than the first..somethin about your flow is weird..its almost like u punched in at random times during the verse, not just at the endings...it sounded good..but weird as well...lol.

6.5/10

pretty decent song, but i could see you doing better though.
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