returnin the feed.
quality is pretty decent...makes it easier to listen to it
first verse...wasn't feelin delivery at all..lyrics are good, I get your message, flow is kinda basic.
chorus wasn't my steez, just doesn't do it's job. a hook should be what makes people wanna replay it...you have the idea down, the pattern and all, but your delivery and emotion just don't go with the track your spittin- just my .02
second verse better delivery than the first..somethin about your flow is weird..its almost like u punched in at random times during the verse, not just at the endings...it sounded good..but weird as well...lol.
6.5/10
pretty decent song, but i could see you doing better though.