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Postby Inches » Feb 15th, '07, 03:09

Bar wrote:
Inches wrote:yooo
dont got much time to tpe, but hot ass trrack,
best i heard from u so far.
srry for bad feed


no problem man thx, n thx for checking :worship: :worship:

hows basketball ? :happy: i remember you saying you got finals or something :sweating:


finals for districts are tonight ( 2 hours)
after that its fraser valleys ( big tourney )
then its best in out entire province
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 15th, '07, 03:12

beat is nice...

hook could use some work

verses is nice.. no problem wiff em...

Delivery is good quality is decent something about it makes it iffy, but i can;t figure out what it is lol


anyways nice track man keep it up


thx for checking man, yeh im working on hooks :sweating: again apreciate the feed :worship:

better than the stuff i heard from u b4.. didnt like u usen that hook

if ur not good at hookz dont use them

overall its aightsome
do ur thang tube do ur thang


nothing but a T-Thing :8) thx for checking and the feed :worship: :worship:

finals for districts are tonight ( 2 hours)
after that its fraser valleys ( big tourney )
then its best in out entire province


hah good luck man :D i suck at it :( :p
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Postby Restlesswon » Feb 15th, '07, 10:02

aye man,nice flow on this,best vocal imo from u man great work
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 15th, '07, 10:05

Restlesswon wrote:aye man,nice flow on this,best vocal imo from u man great work


thanx for checking and the feed :worship: appreciate it man :worship:
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Postby Mc Cubz » Feb 15th, '07, 10:28

i fort i already posted here but it isnt up so il try agen lol.

Bar ye - i think its your best so far, this has been your best improvement in voice projection (since your last audio), Why does everyone dislike the hook so much haha, Fuck it I have to fuck about with hook quite abit, like when I use instrumentals of like 2pac for shows, I have to make sum makeshift bars up for the chorus lol. Erm I would say just keep practising because your improving like us all, and you can only get better. It isnt an easy beat to rap over I knw cos I have the instrumental too so well dun on dat one!
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Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Feb 15th, '07, 10:40

Mc Cubz wrote:i fort i already posted here but it isnt up so il try agen lol.

Bar ye - i think its your best so far, this has been your best improvement in voice projection (since your last audio), Why does everyone dislike the hook so much haha, Fuck it I have to fuck about with hook quite abit, like when I use instrumentals of like 2pac for shows, I have to make sum makeshift bars up for the chorus lol. Erm I would say just keep practising because your improving like us all, and you can only get better. It isnt an easy beat to rap over I knw cos I have the instrumental too so well dun on dat one!


thanx man :worship: yeh imma keep practicing :happy: apreciate the feed :worship: :worship:
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