Shady Babie wrote:
Many thanks.
DelinQuent wrote:gonna feed as i listen.
track one is missing?
2-not really into the beat too much, but it's still a good beat.
flow is sick, rhymes are great. love the change of flow after the chorus.
overall 8/10 good shit![]()
3-flow is nastyyyy, rhyming is solid, i love the overlays you did. wussy from the top and a pussy underneath... DAMN lmfao.
chorus is eh, not really the best but not terrible at all.
LOVE the start of the second verse with the "atter" rhymes.
overall 8/10, loved it.
4-beat is fucking dope. flow is nice. rhymes are good. pronunciation seems to come down on this track in some parts and i found it a little hard to understand. delivery is dope. love the mixing on the chorus. on the start of the second verse the way you flow makes it sound like your talking backwards and i found it amazing lol. flow falls off in this verse a little bit toward the end.
overall 7/10, not as enjoyable as the previous songs.
5-50 cent beat lol. love the zombie kinda sounds lol. love the chopped beat, bar flows well and his pronunciation is great, i understood most of it lol. a good feature from bar on this.
the chorus is hard to understand, too much going on.
flow is solid on the 2nd verse, rhymes are decent, not up to your normal.
overall 6/10, wasnt really into this one, i felt bars verse was a little bit better than yours, good job to both of you.
6-love the girl on this beat, flow is amazing, loving the delivery, im really into this one. first verse is great.
hook-AMAZING, thats all i can say.
second verse is great as well. this song is gonna be my favorite, i can already tell.
overall 10/10 i loved the meaning in it. i love the outro. the green thingy, loved it.
7-hate the beat. hook is kinda weird, cant really understand what youre trying to say. so im not feeling the hook.
flow is nice, rhymes are also good, but kinda sparse, seems like youre rhyming a lot less on this track.
second verse is good, same feed as the first verse.
3rd verse, i like this one best.
overall 4/10, didnt like this track and i wont listen to it again, lyrically it wasnt up to your normal standards, the flow was good tho.
8-im feeling the beat. chorus is good, love it.
1st verse-flow is great, rhymes are sick. blowing my mind with the flow switch for some rhymes, love this track so far. ice cold, i wear 3 jumpers in summer-DAMN, good line
2nd verse-love how the verse starts, the panning you did is real nice. flow is dope. great verse.
3rd verse-again a great start to this verse. loving the down to earth lyrics in here.
overall 9/10, loved this track, good shit.
9-ut oh, eminem beat, you better do good lol. verse starts off strong as fuck, never show respect to any turtle neck? what? lol good verse, loved it
hook-wonderful, great.
2nd verse-wtf you reversed lyrics? im reversing them to hear what you said dick. WTF? it doesnt say anything, wtf happened here? lmfao. verse is fire tho, flow and everything is nice.
overall 9/10 a great track with a GREAT chorus.
10-so far loving it, sounds like a down to earth track, exactly my style. LOVE the delivery on this track, its great. matches the beat well. "Used to waste my breath, now i waste yours" DAMN, good shit. the verse sounds like you were abused, talking about bruises and stuff. thats rough man, this track is great. second verse is just as good. this is now my favorite track.
overall 10/10 best track so far.
11-skit-very powerful.
12-beat is dark, very grimey. flow is crazy got me bobbing my head. rhymes are dope. this verse is total fire.
hook is nice, pretty catchy
verse 2 starts out eh, didnt like the odd flow. grab ya titties, make em squirt LMFAO verse is fire again tho.
verse3-love the first bar or so. this verse is the best on this track. love it.
overall 10/10 a very solid and great track.
13-love the beat, whered you get this shit? your flow is SICK on this, love it. rhymes are also mind blowing. not a bad word to say about this verse. wasnt into the end of it tho.
hook-love the emotions on this, LOVE IT.
spizzy, his verse sounds fucked up quality wise. sounds like too much reverb? but his flow is great and his rhymes are also great.
overall 10/10 another solid track, both of you came hott.
14-beat is epic. flow is good, rhymes are great. love the down to earthness again.
hook-love the iceberg in the background, great chorus, love it
i dont like the trouble man the trouble likes me-good shit that line stood out.
the singing is great too, gives it a great effect. then the rap kicks in and it sounds great, good shit there.
overall 10/10 loved this track, god damn this tape is good
right now i have to go to work, so i'll finish the feedback in about 8 hours or so. so far, fucking amazing
شكرا أخ ويسرني أن يرضوا لكمArabian Shady wrote:damn bro!!!!!!
i downloaded the whole thing and i got BRON ALONE(beat was INSSSSAAAAAANNNNNEEEEE!!!!!!!!!)
ICEBERG(dude the hook and flow was incredible), DEVILS DEATH TONE(delivery was impecable absolutely spot on!!) and SAVIOURSELF(dude kez killed that shit, altho the scratchin was a lil too much) all on my phone!
the fact that u did all of this puts you on a whole new plane for me man,MAJOR RESPECT BROTHER !!!!!![]()
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this was extremely well done, and i must say this was defo worth the download![]()
cheers bro![]()
Peace
Arabian Shady wrote:and SAVIOURSELF(dude kez killed that shit
Kez wrote:Arabian Shady wrote:and SAVIOURSELF(dude kez killed that shit
Chet Starr wrote:yeahduderad wrote:just tried to DL it, says file not found
http://www.sendspace.com/file/dhdl47
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