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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 12th, '08, 13:55

Chet wrote:
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:@ chet - hes being honest and i agree with him on nearly all the reviews so maybe you should re-evaluate your review lol :p


nope I still stand by mine...I didn't like some tracks, and I loved others, if in case you were 2 lazy to read my review ;)



i was joking man calm down :(
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Jay_LP1 » Apr 12th, '08, 14:10

oh well
http://www.answers.com/lighter?cat=technology&nafid=3

I don't know how to scottish say it but I think americans say like that only ^^ or atleast I say it like that

anyways no hard feelings anyone

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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Apr 12th, '08, 14:18

officialblueboys wrote:oh well
http://www.answers.com/lighter?cat=technology&nafid=3

I don't know how to scottish say it but I think americans say like that only ^^ or atleast I say it like that

anyways no hard feelings anyone

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americans didnt invent english

indians didnt invent english im also pretty sure english isnt the native laugnage of india either.

so if your goin to compare my prouncation compare it against england coz thats were the laungage is spoking properly and as i already sayed mines is only slightly differed becuase i wasnt brought up in what youd call a posh tounge and i prounounce with more of a slang.

n i aint tryna be a dick i just didnt like getting told i change prouncation to rhyme only dumb dirty south artish do shit like that
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Jay_LP1 » Apr 12th, '08, 14:21

well I'll not say anythin now coz this will further lead to do somethin else.

I was just giving an advice

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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Xray » Apr 12th, '08, 15:18

officialblueboys wrote:After reading all the song's reviews , do read the summary in the end.

Awake - You're putting too much energy in the song which makes you look fake . And I didn't get what the song was about . Mixing is also bad . You need more practice . Beat is almost average

1/10

We're back - Well the beat is annoying , mixing is not good . It makes your verse bad coz one can't understand what you're tryin to say moreover ur pronunciation is not good in this . Sajjad permormed it good . Hook is ok.

2/10

What I did - Hook is really horrible as it is almost impossible to understand what you're saying . Verse is better than hook . That takes me to ur lyrics . "I don't give a fuck about u" . Is that all you can think for a song? Moreoever you're rhyming with c-riz on 4 lines . How about rhyming it with another word?

0.5 / 10

Raise ya lighter - I was really looking forward to this song as many were giving it good reviews (100/10 by ax-d) . But I was really disappointed after hearing it . Bar is pronouncing "lighter" totally wrong just to rhyme with previous line . Man this totally sucks . Try to pronounce the word right . Verse of bar was ok . As usual your verse was difficult to understand at some points.

And one more thing . 100/10 is a big joke . That would be 100000000/10 for an eminem song . You know what I mean?

1/10

Psycho - this song is somewhat better in flow and ur delievery(only in first verse) . Didn't like the beat . Spizzy did a good job on this song :) . Chorus sounds off the beat . Mixing is not good

2.5/10

Pressure - no words for this ....
0/10

No more hate - Flow , chorus , mixing , lyrics and beat , everythin is below average . everythin sounds off beat.

0.5/10

I pray - Thankgod finally a song where you sound clear . Phew!! This is a song worth listening to . Everythin is ok in this song.

3.5/10

To Be Different - The only nice thing about this is song is sampling on the hook part . Everythin is just average . Somewhat enjoyable.

4/10

What we got - already left feed . After listening the album , lower the rating to 2/10


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"Fuck u all , fuck u all " , is it all you can think of? How many times we've to listen the same thing again and again? Don't you think you don't have any creativity? First of all I can't understand much of your lyrics . And the ones I do , they're almost same in every song . Whom are you referring to anyway? How about giving your lyrics with the songs? Why are you faking so much?

And how about practicing ur verses like 200 times before you actually record it? Coz you really need to do that if you want some good verses . You know this album of yours make "Taking Over" a thousand times better thing .

Your pronunciation has improved but your bad choice of songs , lyrics and beats make this album a total time wastage . Think about your style again and try to write songs with new ideas . And don't believe those who say "8/10 or 100/10" coz it's really really not that good. Try to sell this thing and tell me how many copies you sold with positive reviews .

And hey my reviews are based with the commercial market . This is where you really stand in business of music.

what kind of hating review is that? that's the stupidest review I've ever seen.

Just turning on the mic and recording the song is like a 2/10, flowing to the beat properly increases it to 4/10, putting the right emotion into it is like 5-6/10, working hard on the mixing gives it a slight boost 7/10 so if you really think giving a song 0/10 or 2/10 than your very stupid cause your judging the song with not proper feedback but your own dislikes and likes. Next time if you ever feedback a song make sure you remove the like/dislike out of your opinion and than judge it, cause everyone has different taste of music. Just cause you didn't enjoy the songs doesn't mean you have to give it a 2/10.
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Jay_LP1 » Apr 12th, '08, 15:38

I know what sounds good and what doesn't .

You people just can't crticism . I don't know why.

I'm just telling him his real position so that he can improve rather than being fooled by "8/10 or 100/10".

I think your reviews are the best here . You know everythin and you know what is the next master piece and we all are fools here(who give honest opinion) . OK?
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Xray » Apr 12th, '08, 16:05

officialblueboys wrote:I know what sounds good and what doesn't .

You people just can't crticism . I don't know why.

I'm just telling him his real position so that he can improve rather than being fooled by "8/10 or 100/10".

I think your reviews are the best here . You know everythin and you know what is the next master piece and we all are fools here(who give honest opinion) . OK?

how is 0/10 his real position? he can make better songs than you can, so your position must be -04/10? see giving someone 0/10 or 2/10 isn't helping him at all, its just being un-fair. When did i say my reviews are the best? i was just pointing out that your review is meaningless.

and enuff with the hating, lets keep this thread clean :y:

my review is coming soon bro :y:
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Jay_LP1 » Apr 12th, '08, 16:14

0/10 means his song sucks badly . And when did I say my songs are better than him?

It doesn't matter if you're a rapper or not coz ultimately it's the public who'll make your song hit or flop . What if they your song sucks? You'll say your review is meaningless??

Grow up dude. Face the reality
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Tash8 » Apr 12th, '08, 17:02

officialblueboys, your criticizing based on mainstream or based on people have already made it... if you were to base all your reviews on that then everyone here, EVERYONE here would get 0-1/10 besides a select few who'd get like 2-3/10... but these people are either just starting up or learning how to rap and you can't judge them based on that, you gotta base it on how they improve, a 10/10 for me is that they improved 100% since their last song. now also i don't agree with ax-d when he said 100/10 but maybe he actually really enjoyed this album...

i see where your coming from and why your reviews are so harsh but try to understand the circumstances.
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 12th, '08, 17:10

BIG lol...@ discussion
yea man...thx for the honest feedback...but too much energy...fake? :unsure: explain please...and i know i gotta work on pronouncation and complexity :y: and yeah i thought about trying a new "style" aswell :y:
and everything else wut tash said...and with bar: that is an accent thing...u cant change that...maybe you can but THEN u sound fake...get me? :whistle:
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Tash8 » Apr 12th, '08, 17:13

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:that is an accent thing...u cant change that...maybe you can but THEN u sound fake...get me? :whistle:


:laughing: no dude, if kez or bar change it then they'd be fake cuz their natural language is English, your german use speak another total diff language, so if you change ur accent to speak a diff language then your not being fake.... if that's the case, then ur already being fake for rapping in english. but it's not, so don't worry and fix ur accent.
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Kez » Apr 12th, '08, 17:14

I'll just point out:

Any of you listened to one of OBB's songs? He can hardly talk about pronunciation problems. :whistle:

Seriously stop trying to be incredibly harsh/clever, hating every tape that comes out here, because the last thing we need is a new Coccoa.
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Apr 12th, '08, 17:16

Tash8 wrote:
°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:that is an accent thing...u cant change that...maybe you can but THEN u sound fake...get me? :whistle:


:laughing: no dude, if kez or bar change it then they'd be fake cuz their natural language is English, your german use speak another total diff language, so if you change ur accent to speak a diff language then your not being fake.... if that's the case, then ur already being fake for rapping in english. but it's not, so don't worry and fix ur accent.

i was just talkin about bar...not about me... :tounge2: :flower:
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Jay_LP1 » Apr 12th, '08, 17:17

well honestly speaking , the thing which really bugs me here is that people give fake reviews to a rapper like 8/10 or somethin like that which makes him/her feel that he/she doesn't need to improve much . Which is totally wrong . And this way that artist can't improve . I know I'm harsh but I'm just tryin to help the rappers here.

I'll be polite from my next reviews :y: :y:
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Re: [Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

Postby Jay_LP1 » Apr 12th, '08, 17:19

Kez wrote:I'll just point out:

Any of you listened to one of OBB's songs? He can hardly talk about pronunciation problems. :whistle:

Seriously stop trying to be incredibly harsh/clever, hating every tape that comes out here, because the last thing we need is a new Coccoa.


lol seriously dude . So you're saying that people who don't have a good pronunciation don't know what a good pronunciation is?

Stop acting like a kid and grow up
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