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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Unscarred » Jul 2nd, '08, 23:34

downloading, im expecting something good from you two :whistle: :y:
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Xray » Jul 3rd, '08, 00:04

holy shit :worship: woah...loving the feedback :thumbsup2: cheers to all that enjoyed the song :b:

i think some of you think some of the delivery is boring because of the laid back style i had on it. but what i wanted to do is, the first verse, deliver much more laid back, and go stronger as the song adapts which i did. cause after the chorus the delivery gets slightly stronger. but yeah it all depends on the beat. if the beat is a hyphy beat and powerfull, than laid back flow wont match it, gotta go strong. but this beat is laid back and emotional, so the only way to make it sound good is to go laid back on it. thanks again to all. i'll definitely return your feedback :worship:
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Cwayon_Murder » Jul 3rd, '08, 00:15

Shit's crazy man. From what I heard from you, it's one of your best songs. Your flow and emotion is great, can't find any flaws with it. Beat ain't really my style, but Tash still did a great job.
The quality is much better. Good thing you got a new mic.
Keep up the good work :y: :y:
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Darkblade44431 » Jul 3rd, '08, 01:20

Nice job! i thought you sounded a bit bored at some parts, but for the most part it isn't a problem. Good lyrics, good beat to use, props to Tash for that. And good delivery for the most part. Good hook too.
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Xray » Jul 3rd, '08, 04:09

props to you both^^greatly appreciated :b: :b:

2v3n wrote:and the quality is awesome, how much did your mic cost?

not too expensive, $190 for mic, Phantom $40 cables and shit $25...i had to save up money for almost a month :p (not working thats why)
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Tash8 » Jul 3rd, '08, 22:32

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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby B.A.D. » Jul 4th, '08, 08:11

hey tash good beat man

I don't love the melody, but u genious on this

keep workin on tash... good job on the beat
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Tornado » Jul 4th, '08, 23:30

hip-hop's ALIVE :worship:
,,neway only new thing i can say is that your voice was a little lacking emotion..but sounded clear and on point
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Xray » Jul 5th, '08, 06:12

Tornado wrote:hip-hop's ALIVE :worship:
,,neway only new thing i can say is that your voice was a little lacking emotion..but sounded clear and on point

cheers bro :b: props for checking it man, gladly appreciated :worship:
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 5th, '08, 06:17

Xray wrote:
Tornado wrote:hip-hop's ALIVE :worship:
,,neway only new thing i can say is that your voice was a little lacking emotion..but sounded clear and on point

cheers bro :b: props for checking it man, gladly appreciated :worship:

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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Tash8 » Jul 5th, '08, 06:21

The Toy Soldier wrote:
Xray wrote:
Tornado wrote:hip-hop's ALIVE :worship:
,,neway only new thing i can say is that your voice was a little lacking emotion..but sounded clear and on point

cheers bro :b: props for checking it man, gladly appreciated :worship:

Man your lucky you got flow

somethin i can never have


lol dude when did u start rapping, a week ago? it takes longer than that
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby mart85 » Jul 5th, '08, 16:29

pretty much everybody else said what I thought, but yeah it's real nice track, the flow is sick, it goes real well with the drums, and the quality was good too, pretty solid track :y:

but I understand you Tash, you said you didn't really like the beat, I think the drums are nice and the beat does the job, but I'm not feeling the melodies that much, it sounded a bit random, and I know you can do better, but at least people are feeling it :y: keep it up
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Xray » Jul 6th, '08, 03:47

mart85 wrote:pretty much everybody else said what I thought, but yeah it's real nice track, the flow is sick, it goes real well with the drums, and the quality was good too, pretty solid track :y:

but I understand you Tash, you said you didn't really like the beat, I think the drums are nice and the beat does the job, but I'm not feeling the melodies that much, it sounded a bit random, and I know you can do better, but at least people are feeling it :y: keep it up

cool, thanks bro tash made a remix of this song on the ep with a different beat for all those that won't too comfortable with this beat so all good...thanks again for checking your feed is always grateful :y:

2v3n wrote:wow now i see why my 15 $ mic doesnt sound too good ..
you can definitely hear that the mic was expensive thats why i asked lol
one more thing: i seem to be the only one here that didnt get "bored" of your voice during the track lol
yeah lol need to upgrade your microphone to a condenser microphone, start saving up, but you also need good mixing so yeah gotta learn how to mix if you don't know how to :y: and haha yeah cheers for that :worship:
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby yoshi » Jul 6th, '08, 20:49

ah, it's like the first track of yours that i actually listened to lol niiiice. flow was cool, lyrics too. could use some more emotion, because you rapped at the same pace all the time, but yah, i liked it anyway. :y:

@ Tash: don't hate the beat, it ain't that bad man :)
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Re: Single - Trapped In A Plague [produced by tash]

Postby Tash8 » Jul 6th, '08, 21:03

yoshi wrote:@ Tash: don't hate the beat, it ain't that bad man :)


ha, well i know i've made better so yea... just wait for the remix i think it def. is better than this one
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