!!NEW!! C-Riz ft SaJJad-On Fire

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okay last bump

[Boston]

okay well. C Riz

i heard a few songs with you in it before, and like most people are saying you are improving on your flow. keep working at it, always room for improvement. lyrics are on point to.

sajjaad - it sounds like you have more experience with recording, your flow is nice and looks like youve been writing for a decent amount of time. delivery/emotion isn't bad either

keep it up, good shit

my new song: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=49247 - feed please.

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thanks for the feedback

[Xray]

you sounded like Harlem at the start

C- Riz first verse is dope and honestly one of if not the best one ive heard from you

Hook is cool And as for SaJJad im actually waiting for him to drop something abt dissapointing so some members can catch up with him lol. Nice verse

Third verse i got a question for ya c- riz did you write your first verse a different day to your third? i ask cause you lose some of the style and flow you had on the first verse and have found myself write diffrently over verses if i do write it all in one etc

yeah dont you worry bro an ep is coming in a week or so

[Xray]

you sounded like Harlem at the start

C- Riz first verse is dope and honestly one of if not the best one ive heard from you

Hook is cool And as for SaJJad im actually waiting for him to drop something abt dissapointing so some members can catch up with him lol. Nice verse

Third verse i got a question for ya c- riz did you write your first verse a different day to your third? i ask cause you lose some of the style and flow you had on the first verse and have found myself write diffrently over verses if i do write it all in one etc

yeah dont you worry bro an ep is coming in a week or so

Awsome, Was kiddin by the way lol. Just making a point that ya been probably the most consistent rapper on TR so far

haha cool man appreciate that bro...but yeah that ep is produced by me also

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thx killa... and yeah this 3rd verse was a additional...since this track needed to be done

[Boston]

first verse to me is gooooooooood shit, everything sounds on point for most of the parts
the hook is catchy as fuck, well its bomb so that makes it catchy i guess you can say
and sajjaad your shit always sounds on point, ithink i told you that before though
overall good song

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thx for the double feed

[DelinQuent]

holy shit, my bad, i thought i fed this. god damn c-riz, you're all over the place in the audio stage lol.

eat your asshole till you're just see thru? WHAT??? LMFAO salad tosser!

c-riz-your delivery was great, rhymes are also solid. flow is also good. lyrically this is good. i loved the GTA line lol. seriously tho, you've improved a lot

hook-i liked it, not amazing tho.

sajjad-deliery was DOPE, rhymes are also DOPE, five mics line was sick.


shit gotta go to work! i'll feed third verse when i get home

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thx man....and hahaha made my Laugh Out Loud...fo real....i said "eat you as a whole till you just see thru" haha