Make It - New Track - New Studio **

[Boston]

thanks a lot
ill keep yall posted

i might be getting a job soon, so itll be easier to get into the studio, and ill be dropping stuff more fluently. and when that happens im going to try to do something for TRShady to get my name out on here haha, so i want to get to know yall better and talk collabs ASAP. but yeah just add me, that goes for anyone

joshe_theartist@hotmail.com

thanks for all the feed yall, appreciated.

[Boston]

oh shit, my first decent quality studio track! ha but yaeh im bumping this because this got some good feedback, so anyone down for collabs?! get at me! trying to hit the studio as soon as tomorrow

sorry if yall (admin) get pissed for me bumping, this is like my only time bumping it, but i understand

but woooo
hit me up
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[Boston]

fixed link (zshare)

[Jens14]

Hot shit

[Boston]

lol thanks.

[Requiem]

My first time hearing you lol, the hook is fair. but verse 1 is sick as hell. you got a unique flow, and i think your lyrics are great.
quality's great, and the beat's pretty good.
the second verse sounds a little different than the first. is it still you lmao, but the lyrics/emotions are intense.
the third verse changes up the flow, reminds me of Chamillionare


overall- 9/10. i really liked it, ur delivery was there, ur emotion was good. there were no obvious fall offs, and the quality was great. i thought it was an awesome track. look forward to more. maybe one day we can collab

[Boston]

haha im the 2nd verse bro, lmao

you can see my lyrics first post to haha.
and thanks for thinking im the "best on the song and killed it" (according to the other thread) ha

thanks for checking

[Boston]

^^^ thanks man, means a lot coming from you.

[James R.]

Ok if you're the 2nd verse then you had the best verse of the song by far, but whoever you did this with really aint that fantastic to me. You killed him on this by a long shot, but I'm really not feeling it. It's a decent song, but I'm giving it a 7/10 at best.

Your verse was cool, but while you had a good flow through most of it you did some weird shit. I didn't like how you held certain words because it made them sound awkward as hell. Then you'd speed through other words, sometimes on the same line and it makes me feel like you're still trying to find your flow on the beat (the beat was hot though) so it took away from it. The lyrics were average. None of the concepts were amazingly original, but none were noticeably played either. And you may have been a LITTLE BIT too loud on the beat. Just a LITTLE bit.

Good job on it though. Seriously I know In focused on all the negatives, but you could be one of the best on here if you were able to step your creativity with your lyrics up a little bit. That would really take you to the next level. Keep it going man.

[Boston]

yeah, honestly when i write, it takes me A LONG TIME haha. i dont know how other people write there shit in like 10 minutes. this was the type of song like "yo josh, im going to the studio today you tryna come?" i literally wrote this in about 25-30 minutes (which is short for me) so i know exactly what you mean how the flow fell off and all that. ill post more shit where i can prove i can actually flow good to haha (i posted a few other tracks here to) i only went to the studio with these people as well because im not the richest person and i go to an expensive studio so we all throw down. but ive been saving up for some time, but now im having writers block and a hard time choosing what beat to do haa. but im planning on dropping a few songs by new years. thank you for feeding

and honestly i do appreciate the feed, but maybe you can point out what kind of creativity i can step up? that would probably help. thanks.

[James R.]

yeah, honestly when i write, it takes me A LONG TIME haha. i dont know how other people write there shit in like 10 minutes. this was the type of song like "yo josh, im going to the studio today you tryna come?" i literally wrote this in about 25-30 minutes (which is short for me) so i know exactly what you mean how the flow fell off and all that. ill post more shit where i can prove i can actually flow good to haha (i posted a few other tracks here to) i only went to the studio with these people as well because im not the richest person and i go to an expensive studio so we all throw down. but ive been saving up for some time, but now im having writers block and a hard time choosing what beat to do haa. but im planning on dropping a few songs by new years. thank you for feeding

and honestly i do appreciate the feed, but maybe you can point out what kind of creativity i can step up? that would probably help. thanks.

I totally understand what you mean man. Im one of the guys that can usually write a song in a half hour at the top of my game. But as for the creativity just take a line like "josh come and write for me" could have been sooo much more creative. It's a concept that's been used 1000 times, but it's been done differently. It's nothing I can give you specific examples of but listen to some Jay-Z stuff. he says some pretty bland stuff with a very creative mind when he does it. Same with Biggie. It's something that develops the more that you write. Practice makes perfect type of thing

[Boston]

oh yeah most definitely, that was probably being lazy as well haha, im not even going to lie, but thanks a lot

i want to collab with 'bigger' artist on here to help get my name out here more, and to inspire me and make me step my name up. ahem mcma... ;] lol but seriously people hit me up!

i appreciate all this.

[Boston]

thanks ^^

[Skorp]

This shit is dope man. First verse was fire..second verse was ill..third wasnt bad. The quality was nice..enjoyable track.

[Boston]

^^ thanks man

wait until the new track tonight! ha.