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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Tash8 » Jan 11th, '09, 23:17

i only get one exclamation?

WELL FUCK YOU THEN! :angry:
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 11th, '09, 23:27

Tash8 wrote:i only get one exclamation?

WELL FUCK YOU THEN! :angry:

calm the fuck down...people might think ur muslim hahahahaha

anywho
thanks chet!!!!!!!!
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 11th, '09, 23:34

thanks for feed man :flower:

and yes the mixing was incredible........
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Tash8 » Jan 11th, '09, 23:38

McMaybe wrote:Mixing on the verses was perfect (effects wise, mixing wise). Some off points, but that didn't affect the quality at all. I loved it, and the personals were funny and well executed. I don't think "race" matters, considering Eminem has also mentioned Muslims in a derogatory fashion on a "diss" track. When beef (whether planned or spontaneous) is involved in the creation of a song, the limit is how many times you can drop personals.

At people here that commented in a negative way towards the mixing... Most of you sound condensed and under zealous emotionally. The mixing here was perfect for this level of quality. The day someone with a computer mic mixes their better, I'll pay them.

Lyrics were great. Flow has improved immensely since the last track, and this style of music will surely catch on.


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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby B.A.D. » Jan 11th, '09, 23:39

ok

first off, the beat choice is excelent, big tops on that, now going deep into the flow situation, you got a pretti Fucked up flow, but what amazed me is that you still managed to ride along the beat, even tho' youre structure got shitted by your flow, kinda looks like if you wrote it after you spoke it, you know what I'm saying?... thats a big issue you gotta fix. now the rhymes were great, pretti decent, but again back to the structure all the multi's you had where fucked out by the way you flowed them. Still to a good eye like mine, I can see the excelent work you put into those, just gotta fix those 2 problems. the mixing and mastering is excelent, but the hook still needs work. the effects you used where great, excelent idea, big tops on that A+ on creativity, also the punchlines where sick, few here could've done that better, nice personals (except the religion and the section 8 thing) wich are not fun to be messing into. Other thing I noticed is your delivery, that is sick, you got one of the best emotions n deliveries on the site, some sick lines which give mostly the win into this battle. so just fix those issues I told you and then you can go to the next level of battling (against me, kez or mc maybe). and most of all, youre american so you need to double chek your pronunciation, wich was ok through all the track except one or 2 times. so basically for a Diss track is it TOP NOTCH :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 11th, '09, 23:41

big ax- MAJOR PROPZ!!!!!!!!!!! :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Kez » Jan 12th, '09, 00:06

Big Ax-D wrote:u didn't shouted me out :angry:


:angry:

I had to hear this, so i put it on my phone and checked it.

Anyway, i'm very surprised. This was actually a very powerful diss. The punchlines were crazy, a lot of em actually made me laugh. The flow switched up a lot, kept it unique. I still think your delivery needs a bit of work, either that or i'm just not much for it. Your quality sounded fine to me, i think people are just being picky.

And for those getting butthurt over his "racism": LOL

I doubt SaJJad would pussy out, though, be interesting to see what he comes back with.
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 12th, '09, 00:10

thank you kez :flower: :flower: :flower:

you are the shiznit...
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Boston » Jan 12th, '09, 02:02

i still havent listened, but i told you some shit on msn ima get back to you probably tonight bro
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and as for kez, you never got back to my asylum track! lol its all good tho :o
mixtape sooner than u think ppl!

but anyways back to sticcy, check out dis shit!
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Boston » Jan 12th, '09, 05:18

okay for a diss this was pretty good, i mean you did good working with what you knew about him, this being online and all. some of the punchlines were very amusing (you lessa than nas, you NA) lol.
the flow is there, the rhymes/multies are good. dont seem forced for the most part. beat is nice. old school vibe to it..middle eastern feel. lol nah. not guna comment the chorus, 2nd verse aint that good. but you made up for it in the 3rd. some punchlines were basic (only way youll explode is with a fuckin dynamite, lol that been used many times in different ways) but im curious to see how hell respond to this. good job sticcy z.
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 12th, '09, 05:19

thanks boston :flower:
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Boston » Jan 12th, '09, 05:23

your welcome, im still waiting for that album!!!!!
you should name it detox. i mean its all hype.
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 12th, '09, 05:24

Boston wrote:your welcome, im still waiting for that album!!!!!
you should name it detox. i mean its all hype.

i should dude
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 12th, '09, 17:48

[quote="McMaybe"]Mixing on the verses was perfect (effects wise, mixing wise). Some off points, but that didn't affect the quality at all. I loved it, and the personals were funny and well executed. I don't think "race" matters, considering Eminem has also mentioned Muslims in a derogatory fashion on a "diss" track. When beef (whether planned or spontaneous) is involved in the creation of a song, the limit is how many times you can drop personals.
quote]


true but here's how he said it :

[quote]"you claim to be a muslim but you irish white
fuk you fat boy, drop the mike, lets fight!"[/
quote]


he didnt diss the religion man, but comin back to what sticcy said:

"you got me stumblin straight, fuck your musilim faith,
i was laughin at your asses, when we blew yall wid a tank,
missle fire in the air, puttin wind in kids hair,
we raped you home country, plant a flag up in there,
iran iraq wherever you from, both places are dumps,
all the homes are just slums,.."


how can you call it fair or compare it to what eminem said, it seems like you want to justify sticcy's lyrics at all costs
i agree that personals make the difference when it comes to a battle, but there are ALLWAYS limits.

but sticcy that track was straight fire man, you've improved a whole lot since the last time i heard you and indeed the beat (as Big Ax said) is dope.
good job
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: STICCY Z - SAJJAD DISS!!!!!!!!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 13th, '09, 00:07

dude i always push the limits...but thanks homie
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