**Mixtape** C-Riz-One Verse Wonder

[Tash8]

Who I am: cool opening track, still need to work at your delivery, it's too dominant with the beat, if ya know what i mean..flow is catchy and i like how it matched the beat. that's dope.. good opening track don't know what esle to say

Heads Or Tails: beat is amazing though the voice is annoying. omg dude your flow is incredible and delivery is perfect, you should rap in german more, you sound dope as hell, i dont understand it but it sounds right.. when you thru english in there it sounded sick, you should do this more..

Monstor Wave: I like the mixing on this, makes it sound cool.. lyrics sound sick, and i like the name drops of legend rappers. flow is sick.. one of your better english tracks.

Beat Your Speakers Up: i like the change up of style but really not my style so i can't appreciate it.. lyrics were cool, and your flow was cool.. but hook was lame imo, i dont like when people change vocal pitch to lower..

Take Em Out: I like the mixing on this.. i got it you can take em out haha! this is like a southern type of song so i cant enjoy it that much

heat coming: i like the beat, your delivery matches it well, but i can't really understand you, you gotta articulate a little better..flow is good..

Real World: your pronounciation is better here.. flow is a bit choppy, but it works..i dont' like the hook at all.. you need scratches for that to work well... not one of my fav tracks

Talking About You: i kinda like your delivery on this.. very calm, fits you well.. regardless of concept...

Destined to Shine: i dont like the mixing of the vocals on this.. need more higher frequency on your vocals.. your accent was very vibrant on this track, so it made it hard for me to enjoy it... not really feelin it.. lyrics were good though

Grand Finale: never seen this side of you, way more upbeat, though i felt like you were reading off a piece of paper and it was very noticable.. lyrics were cool and a great ending track

bonus 1: naw, don't like this at all.. beat, flow, lyrics, everything.. it's too lame imo and unoriginal.. is Spizzy on the hook?

bonus 2: same as above... i dont like it.. your flow is too choppy, it felt like you were saying words to each drum rather than just flowing if that makes any sense

anyways, good album, it shows your range in beats aswell as flows and deliveries.. now i believe you should pick your best one and focus on that and work like that... good job

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

word tash....thanks....and propz on feeding... really appreciate it

[JPearson]

checked ur myspace earlier man it was fucking siiicckkkk, lyrics, flows, ryhmes, topics man evrything was on point... sounded like summin ud pay 11 quid for (uk album costs lol)

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

lol^
thanks for the bump haha

[JPearson]

anytime C