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.::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Wallace » Jan 16th, '10, 17:14

My review. :8)
Beat - I like these kind of beats, they remind me of when I used to play keyboard back in '99. They're relaxin'. L&D made it good.
Delivery - Vettori sounds like Em at delivery, actually... he really sacrificed the meaning of the lyrics for the nice rhymes. I can't get a full concept followin' all the lines. But it's alright.
Tash made what I like a lot, a unpredictable flow. Nice concept.
The chorus's simple at singing, sometimes it's good sometimes it's bad. The beat, for me, does not demand exactly a complex singing chorus. So its good.
Overall ,the song is nice. Really got replay value and do not sounds forced.

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EDIT: Grammatical corretion.
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 16th, '10, 17:32

Vettori wrote:Thanks alot yo. Thanks for taking time to feed. Tash deserves alot of credit here...heald his own :D

some say he heald it better than I :D

any new songs u workin on Le ? lemme know when yu drop a sick joint, ill give it a listen :D

np man :8) and yes im droppin a new song with axd soon :smoking:
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Vettori » Jan 16th, '10, 17:38

Thanks for checkin wallace and Random, Hmm I guess ive got some more to work on. as i said before the meanings more for me. and its not to direct cause it gives you the chance to Paint a picture urself..kinda let yu be the creative one, and let it mean what yu want it to, to you.

Sounds good Le..... just pm me when its done :D
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 16th, '10, 18:31

i digg this shit man, i thought vettori handled the track really well, i thought his complexity really suited the track, sick lyrics, sick flow. Excellent effort
Tash realli complimented Vettori, he to the beat to a whole new level with another way of approaching it.altho the pause in the end of his verse was wierd.apart from that i think the track is DOPE
Sick shit guys :b:
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby _Ironic_ » Jan 16th, '10, 18:37

beat is tight

vettori eats this track alive...swallowed and shit it out...seriously dope. def. my top 3 fav on trshady. almost anything he touches is golden. another flame track man :y: :y: delivery, lyrics, and flow is flawless...keep doin it man!

chorus wasnt really feelin it too much

tash comes in...flow is somewhat choppy, doesnt all mesh together properly. delivery is getting better...i can hear more confidence in your voice decent lyrics..overall above average :y:

overall i'd give it a solid 8/10... if the hook woulda been better this coulda been easily a 9/10.
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Hadez » Jan 16th, '10, 18:38

beat's good :y:

both your flows were on point so no comments there. lyrics were nice from both. i liked how the chorus was done, but it sounded like some of the words were mumbled a little and the effects on it kinda kept it from being better than it could've been.

over-all nice track :y:
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Spyder » Jan 16th, '10, 19:02

fantastic :worship:
i dont get around here much so im really glad you guys pm me to get my ass over here :y:

Vettori: your flow and delivery were great man, it felt like i was listening to a pro track
the lyrics were great and meanigful, you have a perfect vioce for this kind of shit
the hook was excellent, my fav part of the song actually. you have a nice singing voice
for a rapper cross kinda thing :o

Tash: i loved your as well man, the flow was spot on. the delivery for me was only ok
i felt that after Vet's verse it was less emotion given in the voice, but still it was good bro
the lyrics were great, everything rhymed ;) ;)

lifeanddeath - excellent beat man, fantastic :worship:

great mxing

dope as track :b: :b: :b:
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Tash8 » Jan 16th, '10, 19:17

wow thanks a lot for the feed guys...I wanna explain the reason for the stop where I say i will not lose, will not lose...everything i do with my lyrics has a reason

i end the verse saying
"and you can see why, i'll be fine in the meantime
untill we're old and senile, then you will see why"

as in telling you, i'll be fine for now but in the future i'm coming back with vengeance, which is why i take a break with I Will not lose, will will not lose...it's kinda like a pause as in we move to the future and then this comes out and says

"when you think I'm buried that's when I dig out my grave
then I'll grab the pen and turn and burn the fuckin page"


just to explain why i did a pause in the verse...

thanks a lot for the feed guys.
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Wallace » Jan 16th, '10, 19:49

I could get the pause on lyrics, I heard some songs with resources like pauses, verses sung with sudden rage and after that just rappin' normally, to intensify the ideas and feelin's.

i dont get around here much so im really glad you guys pm me to get my ass over here


I was PM'ed too :o My internet is still unstable, so I gotta hurry to check just the essential on foruns. Wish I could pass hours so i could get start to post in all sections. :coffee:
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Tash8 » Jan 16th, '10, 22:31

Wallace wrote:I could get the pause on lyrics, I heard some songs with resources like pauses, verses sung with sudden rage and after that just rappin' normally, to intensify the ideas and feelin's.

i dont get around here much so im really glad you guys pm me to get my ass over here


I was PM'ed too :o My internet is still unstable, so I gotta hurry to check just the essential on foruns. Wish I could pass hours so i could get start to post in all sections. :coffee:


haha i didnt' pm anyone haha but thanks man!
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Solace » Jan 16th, '10, 22:58

Mad dope collab. But Vettori, sup with the quality cause your old tracks sounded MUCH better.

Chorus is MAD dope.
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby slimsoxshady » Jan 16th, '10, 23:38

verses sound straight but that hook is absolutely massive...one of the best i've heard periodically checking out the audio section this past year
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Vettori » Jan 17th, '10, 03:04

Thanks alot to everyone...Was excited to release this for a while...Feels good that we did...

IMO some people will like the chorus...Others may not, because it's not the typical Hook u hear day to day..it may take a few listens to adjust...As it did for me as well...But then it just grew on me..Once i memorized the lyrics..It was fun. and sounded very proper.. I honestly think if the chorus was mixed professionally...It could sound dope...With my mic It removes some of the bass from my voice...and really just brings the quality down. As solace said. if i wanted to i can record at my boy's house and have sick quality each time.... But sometimes its alot to make that trip...depends on my life scenario. anyways again I appreciate everyone & ALL of you who checked this...Was fun to make..and enjoyed hearing the feedback :D

Happy new years btw hadnt got the chance to tell ppl....it's still january so i should be in the clear " :whistle: :p
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 17th, '10, 11:43

wow ,, really sick track ,, from ya both ,, i love da beat ,, mixing is cool ,,, vettori verse was dope ,, i liked it man ,, you flowed pretty well , and i liked ya chorus , it sounds ,, so nice,, tash ,, really it's the best verse i have seen from ya ,, you flowed .. so good , delivery were , so sick , , i liked da lyrics, from both of ya ,,,, keep it comming guys , 9/10 ,,, :worship: :worship:
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Re: .::A Lot To Learn (Prod. By: Life & Death)::. Vettori & Tash

Postby Le Tunisien » Jan 17th, '10, 13:47

Tash8 wrote:wow thanks a lot for the feed guys...I wanna explain the reason for the stop where I say i will not lose, will not lose...everything i do with my lyrics has a reason

i end the verse saying
"and you can see why, i'll be fine in the meantime
untill we're old and senile, then you will see why"

as in telling you, i'll be fine for now but in the future i'm coming back with vengeance, which is why i take a break with I Will not lose, will will not lose...it's kinda like a pause as in we move to the future and then this comes out and says

"when you think I'm buried that's when I dig out my grave
then I'll grab the pen and turn and burn the fuckin page"


just to explain why i did a pause in the verse...

thanks a lot for the feed guys.

i think if u ended ur verse with " i will not lose,will wil not lose" it would sound a lot better,and that way we wouldnt feel the weird stop,thats what i think anyways :happy: :) :y:
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