***QUALITY CAN'T BE FIXED.....BETTER SOUNDING AUDIO***

[Xray]

Bad delivery. It made you sound corny as hell lol. And the flow isn't working imo. You have too much syllables in one bar and because of that, your breathing is going out of control therefore you have that delivery... Beat wasn't good, it was average as hell. If you want to make dope tracks, you're gonna have to find dope as fuck beats. Keep working. Dubs make vocals sound more interesting, but don't over do it and pull a DZK...