[New] Bar - Permit Our Sin(Produced By Mart85)

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^ i got hit with that story for 6 months straight, then when i got into college i had an excuse

"get your ass out there and find a job"


"i am tyrig to find a job but first i need the qualification dumb bitch now get in the kitchen n make me some food!!"


works a charm

[Xray]

yeah fuck..im going to college but it dont count for them..but if my cousin goes to college its like an empire entered a building..i hate that son of a

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

yeah fuck..im going to college but it dont count for them..but if my cousin goes to college its like an empire entered a building..i hate that son of a

wanne eat him


im a little peckish

[Xray]

hell yeah....you can eat his brain ill eat his pockets *money*

[Xray]

Damn x-ray is older then me

My birthday is June 26

whos your daddy bitch

just playing

main thing is were all turning 18

clubs here i come

[Xray]

you wanna go to clubs for girls?

i wanna grab hammers and ski masks and rob every mafucker in ther..crack a few skulls...

maybe have a feed on some hunnie and take the bones home for dinner

[Xray]

yep what you think i was human?

phhh please..humans are soo weak..

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

B - Bar
U - Under
M -Mad
P - Prostitutes

[SajN]

DAMN, DAMN, DAMN!!

THIS WAS A DOPE TRACK!

Good lyrics, and the best I've personally heard from you
You got great rhymes
I loved the third verse

The chorus was fire!
Good work

Dmn, I really like this track

The beat is also damn good Nice work on it Mart

thanx man really glad you liked it suprised you prefered the third verse though lol, i feel as if i slacked and used the easy option with the multi's on that verse lol

thanx the feed ya'll

I'mma bit late to answer back but anyway

haha, I assume you know that I'm a bit different
I just liked it, can't really tell why. It wasn't the best verse, but this was the verse that I loved

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

^lol, no problem man, thanx again

[Unscarred]

\:D/ wooo clubs...wait what am I gonna do at a club, I already have a gf

I'll just keep drinking at home

lol you gora have 18 to let you in club? i am 16 and i can go to clubs and 8 august i will be 17

[yoshi]

here you go: nice one overall, lyrics are dope. i loved the chorus, was catchy, now it'll be stuck in my head for the whole day, thank you asshole. but i didn't feel the flow on the verses. 2nd one was pretty good, but it just didn't sound that good on the others


beat was good, really. big propz to mart.

[Jay_LP1]

well man I'm a big fan of yours . I think you are the best rapper here . But this song is not good . It seems like you changed your style or somethin like that coz I can't really understand your words . In previous songs of urs , u were almost crystal clear

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

here you go: nice one overall, lyrics are dope. i loved the chorus, was catchy, now it'll be stuck in my head for the whole day, thank you asshole. but i didn't feel the flow on the verses. 2nd one was pretty good, but it just didn't sound that good on the others


beat was good, really. big propz to mart.

thanx for the feed apreciate the honest opinion

well man I'm a big fan of yours . I think you are the best rapper here . But this song is not good . It seems like you changed your style or somethin like that coz I can't really understand your words . In previous songs of urs , u were almost crystal clear

yeh before my delivery/accent was altered coz i thought thats what i had to do to sound good when rapping, then i learned more about hip hop and got into my local hip hop scene more and decided to not change my voice and rap with my accent more and i have gotten into a more raw style witch i like and personely feel as if it sounds better than my older style so it was a concious decision to make these changes, i can understand why people who liked my older stuff would feel as if its a dramatic change and not enjoy it as much hopefulyl as i progress in this style and start spitting it more cleary (i accept i need to work on pronouncing word more clearly) you and others who dont like this style will get more used to it and appreciate what it brings to my music, that being alot more lyrical, more metophircal concepts and a more naturual sound.

apreciate the feed and honest opinion man, thanks for listening

[Big Proof 4ever]

is it possible to download it cuz my net is too slow to listen it online