Bar - Get On The Game

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[Tash8]

real nice short track I liked the flow, I especially liked the second half, it was my favorite part... I think the delivery could be a bit better (there's always room for improvement) but I think it was still pretty good.. one advice I would give you is to try to make the layovers a little "tighter", cause in some lines they weren't >perfectly< on time with the main vocal track like during the "this aint no small scale search" line... nothing major, but it could still help to make your tracks sound better

anyways, keep it up man

thanx man, i think tash rushed the mixing a bit after he found out it was just a side verse that was rejected lol but i agree with the layover apreciate the feedback man

yea he decided to tell me it was a side track after i spent 1 hr on removing the pops then i said fuck it and just put the overlays how they were and yea lol

[ThomasAguanis]

I liked your flow on this, a lot. There's a few lines which are hard to understand and a few loud pops as well but it doesn't take away from the song. The beat choice was nice and the lyrics seemed well written. Keep it up

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I liked your flow on this, a lot. There's a few lines which are hard to understand and a few loud pops as well but it doesn't take away from the song. The beat choice was nice and the lyrics seemed well written. Keep it up

thanx man appreciate the feedback, im still tryna work on my pronouncation, its hard when the only people who can help me are local so they understand fine lol will keep working on it though

[die2nite]

Hey bar, haven't seen you in a while. Anyways, this is a big improvement from the stuff I heard coming from you almost a year ago. Your flow has improved a lot and I can now understand you even through your accent. You're annunciating really well.

A couple of the lyrics didn't make much sense too me but it's all good, I like the multies.

[Speech]

liked the lyrics, performance wasn too good, i like the beats you are using, that non-mainstream shit
respect you for the stable flow there....hmm can;t lie this time the accent made it hard for me to understand fully but....you posted lyrics so thatz aaite
nice to hear a verse from you now and then

keep it up

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Hey bar, haven't seen you in a while. Anyways, this is a big improvement from the stuff I heard coming from you almost a year ago. Your flow has improved a lot and I can now understand you even through your accent. You're annunciating really well.

A couple of the lyrics didn't make much sense too me but it's all good, I like the multies.

thanx man, appreciate it if you want me to clear up any of the lyics just ask lol

liked the lyrics, performance wasn too good, i like the beats you are using, that non-mainstream shit
respect you for the stable flow there....hmm can;t lie this time the accent made it hard for me to understand fully but....you posted lyrics so thatz aaite
nice to hear a verse from you now and then

keep it up

appreciate it man, ill keep working on my performace and pronouncation