[Album]C-Riz-The C-Riz Project!!!....

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oh dayme..thx for checkin bro

[Kez]

Right, here we go

Intro:
Does it's job.
Pretty good, atmospheric.

Awake:
Loving the beat
The way you say words is still sounding a bit robotic, but improved
Flow is decent
Lyrics are alright
Hook is decent
Concept is alright
Quality sounds fine

We Are Back:
Again good beat
Hook i don't like, it sounds like it tries to follow the beat but you can't sing it right, so you just barely sound along with the beat. Sorry, but that's how it sounds to me.
Delivery on the verses good from you
Lyrics decent, flow sounds alright, a lot like Awake.
Your second hook sounds off beat
SaJJad's delivery and flow kill the track
Lyrics are some fuckin funny shit, "The Teeth Fairy"
SaJJad owns this track

What I Did:
Nice beat
Hook is like Awake, i think when you try to sing you're raising your voice too high or somethin, don't like it much
Like the flow on this one
Lyrics are like your past few tracks
Delivery is alright but a lot like the others

Raise Ya Lighter:
Amazing beat
C-Riz your verses, flow is good, lyrics are alright, delivery decent
Hook.. Goddamn Bar your best thing since Pride
Bar's verse kills this track too, must be said.
His flow owns this beat, some great rhyming and his delivery is like calm yet pissed off, it's great
Best track on the tape, no doubt

Psycho:
Intro is a bit weird
Beat's alright
You sound way too out of breath on this
Lyrics decent, flow decent but it suffers by you being so out of breath
Spizzy: Wow, great. Mint multis, nice flow, nice lyrics
Spizzy surprised me , in a good way
Hook is alright
A good thing about this is your quality both sound the same, that's a problem some people who've done these types of tracks have suffered.

Pressure:
Nice beat
Concept's alright
Lyrics are average
Delivery sounds just like all the others
Flow decent
Hook is alright

No More Hate:
Great great beat
Hook aint too bad, but you mixed it off beat a few times
Delivery/flow on this is my favourite so far
Lyrics again are decent but nothing great

I Pray:
Another good beat
Again, a nice different flow/delivery
Concept/lyrics i like on this !
Hook is a v nice concept

To Be Different:
Nice nice beat
Again, nice flow an delivery
Lyrics and concept again are good
The hook goes good

What We Got:
I hate my parts in this anyway so..
Beat is good
Hook is alright
Concept has been done
Some alright lyrics from you
Delivery/flow sound similiar to many of your others

Outro:
You sound weird/robotic when you're talking in this, i dunno what it is. Lacks emotion/authenticity.
It's weird, this verse is some of your best
Flow is great, delivery works well
Lyrics and concept is alright

Overall:
A good attempt, considering you're relatively new.
On many tracks, your delivery and flow sound very similiar
I loved:
Raise ya Lighter
Outro
To Be Different
I Pray
For improvements, work on making yourself sound more varied on different tracks
Your lyrics are sometimes quite simple as well
The tracks i mentioned i liked for their different approaches to concepts, most of the other tracks seemed very similiar in concept to me.
Your beats you choose are great
So good work on this, and come back harder with your second tape

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thanks very much man....yeah im trying to find a new style now...a bit laidback and shit...
thanks for the review again...good points there...

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uhmm u dont have to put it anywhere... not good enuff yet haha
but yo propz for checkin
2nd album coming...someday

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hmm feel free

[Kez]

haha no worries, I don't think I'm gonna put my tape on datpiff either...I still need to put kez's up

I only said rapidshare, cause your album is gonna be gone on the 27...doesn't zs delete files in 30 days even with dl's

Yeah you do!!

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got a soundclick link?

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got a soundclick link?

this fagalter from hiphophomoeffect?

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sry no soundclick

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wow 600 views....last bump

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downloadin.. listenin while working... so will give feed as track goes by.. sorry for da delay...

[C-Game]

first two songs was good stuff man
awake had a lot of energy in it.. loved it

What i did- chorus is bad.. sorry .. ur not on pitch.. da verse starting at 1.34 is da best in da song.. except for da chorus which needs heavey redoing or fixing durin mixing da others are ok..

psycho==last verse was kool guys.. da transition between u guys.. criz voice was lil lower than spizzy.. so far my favourite track.. da background screamin in da chorus was not audible enuf for me coz iw as on my laptop.. so cant comment on that

no more hate -- good chorus on this..da lyrics was allright.. and new style for u..

i pray.. da concept and meanin was good.. but some plaaces u sounded a lil lazy mate..

to be different
nice song form u man.. delivary was onpoint .. flow was there.. and overall da chorus wporked well wit ur shoutin .. nice work man

wat v got... good track to end... kezs verse was lyrically ill.. but distorted.. criz had great qualit.. good collab man

sorry cldnt be more descriptive..at work/./