DelinQuent wrote:wow i totally forgot about that whole kblock stealing a verse thing.no matter why you did it, it's still fucking retarded.
and stop telling people who don't make audio to stop giving you feedback. you think magazine reviewers are actually rappers? no dumbass.
Inever told anyone to stop giving FEEDBACK, no one has given FEEDBACK. they've left hate comments cos I dissed their idols/friends, whatever these guys are to them.. If you actually payed attention you'd see the difference. Some one saying "Your audio sucks blah blah blah" that doesnt even rap? that's not feedback homeboy
i make audio. i'll give you feedback again.
you're rhymes are extremely unoriginal. "problems/solve em" every emcee ever has spit that line. you have terrible pronunciation. "engwish/probwem". your personals were kinda dumb, seeing as you threatened physical violence in an e-beef, fact is, you'll never actually meet these cats so you'll never give them an uppercut, have them running and manage to hold your rum in. threatening violence over the internet is wack. the car-bomb line is racist. hip-hop is about coming together, not discrimination. as for axe calling you a *****, i don't condone that either and he shouldn't have said that. your flow was actually decent, delivery not so much. you sound like youre trying to be quiet. get in the zone and get some emotion into your verse and it'll come out better.
See, that's feed.. why would i say not to leave that? It's how you FELT ABOUT THE TRACK.. Not some hate shit just cos of my name. Though, I'll upload the pellas to show you the pronunciation... Or get maybe in here to tell you since he mixed it. Believe me, my speech is fine. Other than that... Violence is what diss tracks are about. "Picture kiss not come out swinging" "fighting the champ with a glass jaw at the garden at nasaw"-- Both violence in a diss, did he do it? No, its a diss... duh. As for the car bomb, if it hit home, that's what its supposed to do. ITS A DISS. You want me to be nice? Apparently it had the effect i wanted.
don't talk of being lyrical if you're not lyrical, this is coming from me, i write simple shit because i enjoy simple shit. you spoke of all this lyrical ability and i was expecting metas and multis, you had neither. but go on, say i'm riding dick. i just gave you 100% honest feedback but i'm 100% sure that you're gonna go on and on, call me a clown, a hypeman, and say i'm riding dick harder than Sajjad or Axe's mother. but i still love you anyway
Sigh, I can show some writtens i have that have crazy metas and wordplay.. But as for multies, there's multies ALL throughout this. I really dont feel like pointing them out, but they are.. Plus, check the rhymeshemes.. inner-multies, transitions, ect. I dont just rhyme on the snare. I dont call this dickriding at all, its broken down honest feed and i respect it.. its what im looking for.
Xray wrote:there's no point of talking to a "self champion", it's obvious you feel your self too much. you call others kids? but really, who's the immature one?
you have facts? you're lyrical? "we all know saj's only talents are car bombs" what you getting at? your idols respect terrorists. so calling me a car bomber isn't dissing me, its basically saying you respect me. now someone please tell me how is that a punchline?
90% of your idols respect violence, and i know that because 90% of rappers talk about violence. so what your saying is that im basically one step ahead of your idol, cause your idol couldn't bomb a fly. please quit talking shit, ima just leave you alone, your more hopeless than i thought.
,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:using the car bombing punchline in another context would work but using it in a diss like this is racists, and makes everything you say pointless if you support racism. plus i can bet in person or in a rap battle you wouldnt use that punchline coz you know you would get your ass kicked for doing so, sorta makes it more pathetic. and i aint talking about the track just that punchline.
i aint leaving feedback coz your pointless.
Tash8 wrote:,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:using the car bombing punchline in another context would work but using it in a diss like this is racists, and makes everything you say pointless if you support racism. plus i can bet in person or in a rap battle you wouldnt use that punchline coz you know you would get your ass kicked for doing so, sorta makes it more pathetic. and i aint talking about the track just that punchline.
i aint leaving feedback coz your pointless.
shut the fuck up, people around here call everyone terrorist that are muslim or anything that looks like muslim... i've been called it myself too...
Tash8 wrote:,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:using the car bombing punchline in another context would work but using it in a diss like this is racists, and makes everything you say pointless if you support racism. plus i can bet in person or in a rap battle you wouldnt use that punchline coz you know you would get your ass kicked for doing so, sorta makes it more pathetic. and i aint talking about the track just that punchline.
i aint leaving feedback coz your pointless.
shut the fuck up, people around here call everyone terrorist that are muslim or anything that looks like muslim... i've been called it myself too...
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