intro-echoes kinda ruined what you were saying. hard to understand
The Criminal's Journal-Cool intro. first verse has a dope flow, rhyming is sick too. delivery is nice as well. doubles are sick as fuck. hook, i think it's the hook anyway, is hard to distinguish from the verses. It doesn't sound any different flow wise or delivery so it's hard to get into it. second verse was nice too.
maybe there was no hook, i'm honestly not sure lol. good track though 7/10
Don't Cross Me-this beat is incredible. Your flow is perfect on this, fucking loving it. Delivery is dope too. Lyrics are strong as usual.
cool thing you did with the hook, but i would have much preferred a regular hook.
second verse is just as strong as the first. End of the verse was superb.
This song was amazing, minus the lack of a real chorus... 9/10
Frozen Death-Beat is nice. Rhyming starts off sick, stays sick. Flow is nice, i pictured something different though.
Not into the hook, it has a good flow and rhyming for a verse, but it's supposed to be a hook.
second verse is killer as well. Flow comes off in spots for syllable mashing, first time i've seen it so far, so i'm assuming you already saw the mistake.
third verse, the stutter was a nice touch. flow is the same, good shit.
overall, a decent track, nothing i personally liked. 6/10
Lyrical Insanity-beat is yucky, not a fan. Flow is jumpy, syllables are messing you up again in some spots. rhyming is dope though, simply amazing at times. At times its hard to understand what you're saying, work on pronunciation.
overall, not my thing but you had a nice flow and the rhyming was solid, 4/10
This Real Talk-Beat is nice, flow is pretty sick. Rhyming is nice too.
Not into the effect on the hook, can't understand a word.
Flow is absolutely awful on the second verse. no offense. Some rhymes are nice. delivery is awful as well. bad feature.
overall, Jay ruined the song, 3/10 due to hook and a poor feature.
Good Bye Present-Beat is nice. Delivery is sick too. Lyrics are strong. Flow comes off a teeny tiny bit, just doesn't sound smooth.
hook is nice, i like it, the mixing could have been better though.
second verse is nice. i like the lyrics, i can feel you on this.
Overall, loved this song, finally get some personal lyrics from you, 9/10
Mic Bust-Beat is gay lol. Flow is nice, not the best though. Lyrics are eh, not my style.
Second verse is roughly the same as the first.
Overall, lyrics were good, but the subject matter is very bland and boring. 5/10 due to subject.
Outro-The flow here is pretty nice, i like the lyrics as well. Falls off when the beat drops though. I liked the show em what you got whether you like it or not line though.
OVERALL, not an average, 8/10.
You flow very well, but you need to change the flow a little bit between verses otherwise it sounds the same throughout the entire song which tends to make it boring. I was genuinely surprised by your delivery and control over your voice. I remember when you first started, compared to now, it's incredible how far you've come in such short time. Subject wise, this was your weakest point. I understand you're into lyrical rap, but having the same subject thru the entire tape had me bored toward the end, then when good bye present came on i was back into it. It was nice to hear something different rather than multies about various ways to kill people and how lyrical you are.
In the end, the stuff that needs work are concepts, I'd like to hear you do more personal work. Flow, at times you stuffed syllables. Pronunciation, at times it was extremely difficult to understand what you were saying.
Other than that, this was an extremely good tape in my opinion. Good shit
