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Redzek - Worth It (zshare link added)

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Redzek - Worth It (zshare link added)

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 14th, '10, 01:46

(feedback link thing: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=101588&p=1404179#p1404179 )

lately i been doing emotional song,so heres another one...let me know what you think :)

download here:
http://www.mediafire.com/?5mb1sxef72luk55

listen/download here:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/82900966fd95b3ab/

Lyrics:

(intro)
yeah..you know sometimes
you just feel like u just wanna give up
you feel like u'r fallin down but u gotta get up
so you try..and they say that good things always come to an end,
but thats bullshit

(verse 1)

i could never understand,what is on your damn head
why would you ever hurt me,i dont want a sad end
and you dont want neither,tell me if im not worthy
and i'll try to believe ya,even though u never heard me
and you only show me hate,yeah all you do is burn me
would it matter if i send a letter sayin that i love you
i lust you,i never lost you, who is above you?
you better know its no one..yeah my heart is frozen,snowin
all the pain that i been knowin,it is hard..so cold and blowin
i still wonder if u'd cry,the day i die,or would you try
to somehow convince yourself that i was never alive
just like when you pretend that you dont love me but you lie
cuz we both know that you do..i swear my love for you is true
i really got no clue,why would you ever be so cruel
i just want a piece of you,cuz im broken you know for who...
its hard,i wish u saw whats in my heart,its you!!

(Chorus)

you know that you are my everything my girl
i aint gotta say a word you saved my world
i dont ever wanna live without you,baby
cuz about you,im just so crazy

you'r perfect,you'r just so amazing
you'r worth it,lord give me the patience
guess im gonna just now redeem my self
how i been and felt..makes me seek the help

(verse 2)

i just loved you damn much,hush,its too hard
i wished we could touch,and clutch but you start
losing your mind everytime..now whos smart??
why you tryna act like i need a new heart
now i got nothing left only blue scars
let the truth spark your lies are like too dark
they just gotta see the light,i just wanna be the right
mister,cuz baby i swear miss ya,i dont ever wanna fight
but it is my only choice,just for you to hear my voice
so i scream out my pain,its insane but i rejoice
i loved you,i love you,i will forever love you
i still do adore you,i'd kill to ever hug you
im ill..heal me...my sickness and cure
are u deaf??hear me!i dont get this for sure
sick of your love and my ilness is pure
but its still this secured!!

(Chorus)

you know that you are my everything my girl
i aint gotta say a word you saved my world
i dont ever wanna live without you,baby
cuz about you,im just so crazy

you'r perfect,you'r just so amazing
you'r worth it,lord give me the patience
guess im gonna just now redeem my self
how i been and felt..makes me seek the help

(verse 3)

i want you everyday
and i want in everyway
to love you,so let me stay
just for you forever hey
cuz i really wanna say
everything thats on my heart
we would never fall apart
i would be in every part
just for you when it is dark
our love is gonna spark
i dunno from where to start
im emotionally scarred
but im gonna play the card
i was dealt.. though i felt
i would get up if i felll
in lovin you i wanna dwell
cuz without you my life is hell
and about you..all i would tell
is that you are the one for me
..with you,forever i should be..
you are the only i could see
you are the only girl in the world
i just want all my words to be heard
this earth would be worse
and just cursed with curse
if it wasnt for u,i'd leave earth & rebirth
wouldnt murk every verse,
you are worth but it hurts
we'll give birth to eternal love,u'r the first!

(Chorus)

you know that you are my everything my girl
i aint gotta say a word you saved my world
i dont ever wanna live without you,baby
cuz about you,im just so crazy

you'r perfect,you'r just so amazing
you'r worth it,lord give me the patience
guess im gonna just now redeem my self
how i been and felt..makes me seek the help
Last edited by Le Tunisien on Nov 20th, '10, 00:17, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Redzek - Worth It

Postby Brownwall » Nov 16th, '10, 08:56

Pretty nice song.

If you have a proper mic then I find a problem with the editing on the vocals, it's unclear and imo doesn't sound good or sit well in the mix. Rap vocals are generally dry, crisp, clean, because clarity is especially important so you can hear the lyrics. Most effect is achieved in the vocal performance with delivery. All you basically need is some compression (even out the sound levels), eq (bring up the high-mids a bit, add vocal presence), and light reverb. Also it sounds like you have overdubs, I would also bring those down a bit, or take them out completely and focus on just mixing a strong lead vocal.
Also with clearer vocals, you could bring down the volume on the vocals, because they're too loud on this mix, and that would also make the chorus sound a lot better.

If you don't have a proper mic, you should get one, there's pretty affordable shit out there.

The content and the lyricism was good for the type of song it was. I also thought you're flow and delivery were good, thought your second verse was best overall, had the best delivery. But it'd be easier to judge with clearer vocals. So, overall, it was nice, but just I would say change your mixing technique.
Last edited by Brownwall on Dec 17th, '13, 06:49, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Redzek - Worth It

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 18th, '10, 17:53

hey tunisien, this one looks good. but mediafire?? c'mon lol, let us stream it first bfore downloading

try usershare or zshare :y: :y:
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Re: Redzek - Worth It

Postby gutawafang » Nov 19th, '10, 08:04

Big Ax-D wrote:hey tunisien, this one looks good. but mediafire?? c'mon lol, let us stream it first bfore downloading

try usershare or zshare :y: :y:
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Re: Redzek - Worth It (zshare link added)

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 20th, '10, 00:18

@ax & guta: there u go :http://www.zshare.net/audio/82900966fd95b3ab/

@brownall : thanks alot man =o!! appreciated really! :) :) :)
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Re: Redzek - Worth It (zshare link added)

Postby Le Tunisien » Nov 22nd, '10, 06:40

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