NEW STEVE SPAG - Good Day (MUST HEAR)

[Steve Spag]

I recorded this about a month and a half ago. Couldn't get the updated version online with kids vocals in the spot where I imitate a voice, but here's the original! I hope you enjoy this as much as I do!!

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Lyrics;

everybody's stressed out always thinkin' the same things
so why should i watch my mouth? (huh?)
and if you seen what i see then maybe you'd change
but that i still doubt (ha!)
and we all need help in some ways but i think it's okay
because i still feel proud (yeah)
the sun rays above me tell me it's a good day
so it's time go out

i feel absoluetly positiviely fine
i just rolled a couple doobies and got a bottle of wine
i feel great, i feel alive
it's my time to climb to the top from the bottom of this soo called life
and i speak no lies, you wanna hear some advice?
well you should be like me because steve soo wise
yeah steve soo fine, "hey we know why!"
"spag's off the hook just like illegal crimes"
and i've reached the sky, i keep on teaching my loved ones
to seize the fun times and spread the trust
'cause there's not enough of it comin' our way
when i think we deserve it like a wonderfull day
it's what i wanted to say, to god i will pray
and i'll try to stay modest as i follow my faith
i ain't hollow, no way, i am more than some brave kid
who swallows his own pride and throws a parade

you see, the way i see things
it's either positive or negative
and what's the point of being stuck in a negative place when there's soo much more out there?
you know i learnt my lesson, i'm just tryin' to keep ya'll on track
to be great you gotta think great and not just think it but believe in it
and that's all i try to be

everybody's stressed out always thinkin' the same things
so why should i watch my mouth? (huh?)
and if you seen what i see then maybe you'd change
but that i still doubt (ha!)
and we all need help in some ways but i think it's okay
because i still feel proud (yeah)
the sun rays above me tell me it's a good day
so it's time go out

Be Sure To Let Me Know What You Think!


Link Of Feed; viewtopic.php?f=38&t=101975

[GibbzyTrShady]

i rate this track highly!!! The beat is some real easy listening nice mellow vibe to jam to
found my head bobbing before you even kicked in,
the hook is pretty decent the sound of it is spot on but the flow seems a slightly off
the verses are dope an the flow is sppot on over all a pretty good track man!!
8/10

Hey return the favour homie

[Jaz]

Agree with Gibbz, definitely a very mellow feel. Not really my style of instrumental but you rode it pretty well. Overall a smooth track, . I'll check out a couple of your other songs.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

honestly one of the most pro artists on here (i envy that lol)

sick track man, i liked the variation in your delivery, the hook was sick and i liked the layed back beat. great track man

[gutawafang]

I wanna see lyrics. But then it's pretty good man. I can relate, especially the chorus. The flow and delivery is perfect man.

[AlexRambo]

These are the kinda songs that really make my day Spag, I LOVE this one, haha!

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed everyone, glad you like!!
Check out viewtopic.php?f=38&t=103479 for "Desert Road".

Oh, and updated first post with lyrics for Guta!


& Bar, I've downloaded your new tape, look for feed in the next few days!

[Kez]

Alright you guys are probably gonna wonder why i'm bumping lots of old Steve shit with my feed, it's cause he asked me to feed all these tracks over the last few months and i never got time, so i wanna share my thoughts. Ima leave this notice above every single one incase someone misses the message

The accoustic feel to the beat is fuckin sweet, i love that
The hook is dope, the flow seemed a bit iffy at the start when i first listened to it but it grew on me. Loved how you ended it too.
Flow at the start seemed like you had to rush a bit with the "couple doobies" bit but you handled it well
Aside from that i got no complaints, you never had a problem with flow in the first place anyway
Your delivery i like on this cause it varies a bit lol, and you seem to have a much more emotive voice in this too, like you actually do feel like you say in the song
The concept i actually really like, very different kind of thing to hear in rap, it sounded a bit cheesy at the bit where you started speaking halfway through lol, but i can forgive that. The lyrics didn't go into cheesy territory at all really though and that's more important.
Can't fault the rhymes and lyrics as always lol, even though it could be considered a bit of a filler track (especially since it only actually has one verse and the rest is just the chorus and talking) you clearly didn't just get lazy with it which is good.