M.pyre - under control

[M-Pyre]

"under control" from my new EP pyromatic.

feedback will be returned as it is greatly appreciated!

link:
http://usershare.net/k8ltqqo2g1zx

thnks in advance guys!

(lyrics gonna drop in a few)

[classthe_king]

First this is a pretty hard beat to rap over and I thought you tackled it pretty well. You slipped up on the flow a little bit but I dug it, it wasn't a flow most people would use. I think it could have been mixed better though, your vocals need to stand out more, I felt they were a little overshadowed by the beat. Good luck though bro, I think you're dope.

[M-Pyre]

First this is a pretty hard beat to rap over and I thought you tackled it pretty well. You slipped up on the flow a little bit but I dug it, it wasn't a flow most people would use. I think it could have been mixed better though, your vocals need to stand out more, I felt they were a little overshadowed by the beat. Good luck though bro, I think you're dope.

this is good feedback! thnks man

I had a feeling the vocals needed to be a little bit louder. but it's hard to keep track of everything when you're producing/mixing the beat too. but it's nothing I can't accommodate so thank you

wat did you mean by slipped up ?

anyways, thnks man. I appreciate it

[M-Pyre]

dam this was actually pretty good, you were spittin like crazy!!

Why, thank you

[M-Pyre]

bump

[M-Pyre]

nothing?

[AlexRambo]

First off, the beat GOES HARD ahah.

But anyways, I thought your flow was pretty damn good as well. My only problem is that its hard for me to understand what you're saying the whole time so I can't really judge the lyrics. You're voice needs to be a little louder in my opinion and I think you need to pronunciate(sp?) a little clearer. But overall in general, its an enjoyable track to listen to and I definately downloaded it, thumbs up!