Sentus- White & Blue

[classthe_king]

I swear it flowed perfectly in my head...fuck my breath control




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Sentus- White & Blue

This is for the white and blue, for my brothers hard as steel
So when they're on Harmon field that you know I'm fightin too
Ignite ya crew as I'm spewin flames inside the booth
I abuse the game cause I choose to reign with violent brute
This divine spitter climbs quicker cause I rhyme sicker
Your heart's big but don't start shit cause mines bigger
I'm wreckin beats till legend's seen on my plaque
So watch closely and see me etch my dream on the pad
And if you're lucky I'll let you stand in the glow
Or you can be just another victim stranded below
One hand on my pencil, one hand on my throat
As I carve my darkest fears in this canvas of hope
Cause nowadays any kid'll start rappin at you
But only a passionate few are really graspin the truth
Who can say they have their heart attached to the booth
And vow to spit till they're out and hit the max of their youth
This is more than just music; it's the core of a movement
To revolutionize thought and restore all that's prudent
But life's a bitch, so I grab the whore and abuse it
You do the same and when you listen ignore the pollution
And how dare you come up to me and talk about Wayne
Every time you speak it seems like I'm crossin out names
You were so caught in trends you forgot about change
And now we wonder adrift, lost without aim
But I got the map in my hand; firm in my clutch
And this has never once been about earnin some bucks
It's about forging a dream with the birth of a trust
So hopefully sometime soon you are learnin from us


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[Satire]

This is just a preference kinda thing but you shoulda done the hook imo.

It started off pretty good. At times your flow felt a little restrained & choppy and as you know, your breath control.

Overall 7/10. Great lyrics but I feel like your style doesn't fit right on these type of beats. Same with Big Poppa. You sounded alot better on Collateral Damage and Devil's Hour.

[classthe_king]

Thanks, I tried the hook but my mic refuses to pick up emotion so it just sounded mad homo so I didn't keep it.

And I'm just tryin to do tracks on different kinds of beats that everyone will like, but I think I'm goona do another dark song with SaJJad again sometime soon, so you should like that

[NicoleEM]

In the begging you seem a bit off beat,but then you picked up.Im no expert but i like it

[Scrubz]

PUNCH IN! that helps breath control! You got great lyrics, good delivery the flow was just off at points. I liked it alot just wish it flowed a lil better. Always wanted to do a remix to this beat, its sick and wiz didnt do it justice imo. But seriously, work on trying to punch in. And hit me up to collab, check my beats in the sig.

[Robbie G]

I thought your flow got a little too slow in the middle part of the song. Other than that I liked it though.

[B.A.D.]

Damn, thats a nice beat
who made it??

yeah, the flow is a bit choppy at some parts. but on some is sick, if u keep it consistent with a more strucutred scheme it can go out amazing.

the lyrics are flawless, sick shit. also your quality is pretti nice, I digs it.

good short track. But yeah, fix up your structure and thats sick.

btw, just a comment If I may. I prefer the name Class The King better than Sentus.. sounds more powerfull, but thats just me.

keep it up bro, I'd like to do a hook for ya sometime

[Robbie G]

Damn, thats a nice beat
who made it??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UePtoxDhJSw&ob=av3el

[Scrubz]

Damn, thats a nice beat
who made it??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UePtoxDhJSw&ob=av3el

This made me lol, i didnt know if he was serious or not.

[B.A.D.]

Damn, thats a nice beat
who made it??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UePtoxDhJSw&ob=av3el

This made me lol, i didnt know if he was serious or not.

Hmm... whats so funny about it?

[Scrubz]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UePtoxDhJSw&ob=av3el[/quote]
This made me lol, i didnt know if he was serious or not. [/quote]

Hmm... whats so funny about it?[/quote]
well im from new york and the songs on 24/7, and i thought u were being sarcastic.... ok i guess its not that funny

[classthe_king]

Thanks for the feed.

@Big Ax-D, I stole that name
http://www.myspace.com/mrclasstheking

[DƎRDYPK]

you already know how I feel bra bra
keep writing & delivering stuff like this
#Swag

[Mr. Chambers]

this wasn't as bad as i was expecting...the comments are misleading...theres a few times where you hold off on the line so you have to rush it..and a couple where the flow's shakey, but other then that its okish...nothing eye popping.

try rapping your verses while jogging. It'll help you improve your breathe control. also try doing punch in's till you get better at it. it'll make your songs sound cleaner.

[preest]

yeah man this aint a bad piece, I too feel it could have had a hook but all in all either way it was nice, the flow was ok, could have been better in places but the quality of the recording outshined that, I look forward to hearing more