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2 New WesT Songs!

Postby WesTMusiK » Jan 20th, '11, 06:39

Check the new tracks. Originally from an EP I was doing called "Poetry Of The Heart but the whole EP got scrapped 'cause in my current mind state I can't finish it.

So, here are the songs, let me know what you think.

Poetry Of The Heart: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dy-u7RrJ45E

Darkness Falls: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQ7GOE6lu1E

Link of feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=104843&p=1487496#p1487496
Emotions get the best of me, the thought of you stresses me
Love me and break me, that's the fuckin' recipe
So why do I miss you? I'm walking on these eggshells
Hoping for an answer and all I do is beg help
- Ellustrate
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Re: 2 New WesT Songs!

Postby TheOfficialThomas » Jan 24th, '11, 05:25

Weessst! I like darkness falls. definetly a sick track! keep it up! and keep it busy!
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Re: 2 New WesT Songs!

Postby Scrubz » Jan 24th, '11, 15:09

I listen to darkness falls first, it was pretty good. Flow and delivery was basic but very clean. Rhyme scheme was pretty dope, i like how u think out side of the box and rhyme shit that shouldnt rhyme! Hook was boring, thought u coulda done somthing better. Your voice lacks a little emotion, i have the same problem. il take a listen to the other song soon. Keep it up dude! 7/10
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Re: 2 New WesT Songs!

Postby Tash8 » Jan 24th, '11, 22:47

ay i'm bout to jet, but i'll catch one before go...



poetry of the heart sounds real raw, like underground beat and flow. love it. human pyschee, i like that rhyme...start to second verse was perfect, real real good..ok i take that back, that whole verse is raw, my fav verse yet.

"never be embarrased" great...u know who u sound like? that lead singer from weezer...that dude that also sings on Magic by B.o.B.

anyways this is a great song man, can't wait to hear your other one...

would love if u dropped some feed on my new song let go?
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