Chambers Monday Freestyle #4 (Produced by 2deep)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0MhbRXvKC34

yea, the past two mondays i was either busy, or sick.

but this is a track i did a month ago. i got so much shit in the vault. I'm working with some local dudes, trying to get out there. Might get a video soon, plus i got my album which will be coming thanks to Ax-D.

anyways let me know the deal.
link of feedback viewtopic.php?f=38&t=106693

[B.A.D.]

Hmm, damn, 2 deep is changing his style, I dont like the beat that much. a lot of weird stuff going on.
and its too loud... the beat volume should be a little lower, cuz here its really above the vocals.

as for the song. excelence.
damn bro, this has a very nice and clean feeling. everything flows great, the hook is amazing, both 2 verses have it all... lyrics, passion, emotion, great flow.

I liked it a lot man.

[DƎRDYPK]

i likes it too
really interested in hearing whatever else your cooking up

[Tash8]

this isn't really a freestyle right?

hi i'm tom chambers, and i got some haters...
like that line..

i'm not feeling the hook, it's not really a hook...not catchy or anything, but i would like that as a bridge..it'd be fine there but not as hook.

i like how you rhyme bury and stare..nice

anyways, cool lil song, i like the second verse best, but both were decent..just get a hook, if u gon finish this song.

[Mr. Chambers]

Thank you broskis. Check check

[Mr. Chambers]

Nb4 the restart!