Chambers Monday Freestyle #5 (Produced by Hala-x)

[Mr. Chambers]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HObH1ysmegI

i was gonna embed, but i couldn't remember how, so fuck it.


link of feedback
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[Mr. Chambers]

Chea!!!!!!!!

[Kez]

The beat is dope
Your rhymes and multis are well-done for sure
I dunno about the concept though i mean the beat is pretty dark but your verse kinda has similiar content to most of your other songs. Not that it don't sound good but i dunno thought you coulda tried to flip it a bit. That said it's still great, the lyrics are great, i can't fault them on pure lyrics.
Delivery is great and pretty varied. Your voice has got the kinda cockiness, fun-making sound to it which works but it aint just the same tone all the way through which is good.
Flow is fuckin good, especially on the "hook" or whatever you wanna call it
Speaking of which the hook is great

So yeah overall it's a good, up to standard track for you
Still waitin for that song that is gonna blow me away though

[Mr. Chambers]

^album broski. Ima peep your track out when I get a break.

[B.A.D.]

Damn, strong beat.

The overall mixing of the track is not so good, its listenable but meh.... it doesnt matter tho' cuz this is just a freeverse track. but dont do it like this on the album haha

I agree with kez, the "hook" flow was intenze, amazing ride along with the beat, really good.

Hmm, so whose that person youre dissing??, lmao he got it, but who? lol

yeah, the best part of this song was the flow, damn son, you ridin the beat well. Lyrics are strong aswell, yeah.. nice haha

[Mr. Chambers]

^what was wrong with the mixing may I ask?

[B.A.D.]

well, the overlays (if you have any) were too low, except on the hook. the vocals sound away from the beat, its possible due to the compression settings you used, it sounds too limited, and there is a little bit of distortion on the highest frequencies if you listen to it on noise canceling headphones. (you can maybe add a gentle high cut to fix it) the reverb needs to be less echoey in its perception, but as wet as it is. And maybe (i suppose), the hiss reduction effect you used might not be the correct one, beacuse its taking too much from your vocals.

the vocals need to sound loud enough over the beat without overshadowing and without sounding too far away from it, maybe you can record a little closer to the mic... or have the mic settings pick up more of what the do now.

ORRRRRR!!!!!!

It is very very likely that its down-side in quality is caused by youtube!... so hahaha, IDK lol

[Mr. Chambers]

Can you peep it on hulkshare and let me know if it's that? I'd greatly appreciate it

[B.A.D.]

yeah, but where's the link?

[classthe_king]

yeah, but where's the link?

In the info box on the youtube

[Tornado]

youtube is fucked, it fucked up your vocals quality. For the most it's alright, but to me, it lacks a bit of energy delievery on the 1st verse, 2nd verse is better but i feel like you could be more aggressive on it. Hook is dope and catchy aswell. Not your best but still listenable

[Mr. Chambers]

^good look broski...you still want that track? i got lyrics and shit, just wasn't sure if you wanted that track or a different one?

[Scrubz]

YouTube Is such garbage, I have the same problem but I have to post it cuz the lazies won't listen if it's not on yt.

Not my favorite track of yours, I think the beat was a little too dark for your lyrics but that's just personal taste. Flow and delivery on point as always, great shits. Lyrics were good and the multi's were dope. Chorus was pretty good, nothing crazy. Nice track man, looking forward to you next! Get at me if u want a beat or production.

[Mr. Chambers]

*gets at you*

[Tranquil]

holy shit your flow on this is great! i loved the multis in this aswell the delivery was also great, i cant find anything to complain about this track, everything is put together well

could you feed my lil song?
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