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Youtube(shit quality): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=stjzysj5ZWE






Mr. Chambers wrote:ok overall feedback
scrubz, i think you had the overall vibe of the song. nice dark shit. your flow was kinda shakey here and there. but i like what i hear.
chorus was okish...kinda corny
stereotype, i dunno. just couldn't get into your parts, you had too much energy or something, not to mention the flow was shakey most of the time. It just wasn't very entertaining to me, sorry bro.
who made the beat?
and I(scrubz) made the beat, I really only use my beats unless some one wants me to be featured on there stuff... Which like never happens lol. This is actually an old beat of mine, always il go an feed you. Again thanks and hit me up if u ever want me to produce anything for ya and/or collab. I'm tryin to branch out. 




Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah

Big Ax-D wrote:Tr collab???.... who is Stereotype lmao?
anyway
The beat is very very very very good, damn it is sick, so great job.
hmm, it sounds like you are rapping this on your closet tryng not to wake your parents up, need to give it a bit of more emotion. Either way, nice quality, sound really clean, where did you recorded this?
the stereotype guy needs to perfect his flow, his rhymes are kinda cool, but he's not flowing them.
your flow is better, but man you need to ride on the beat, go smooth on the beat man, feel it... need to catch that flow better.
as creativity matters and originality, this is high class, top notch shit. very good mic passing type, the hook is marvelous. great great job my friend.
I loved this song




hahaha... okay your flow was good but to me your delivery was a little off, you sounded a little..... i dont know, plain? you should try doing ad-libs so that your vocals sound stronger
Sterotype held his up on this song aswell, his verses were good.... all together this is a good song, 4.5/5 


EminemIsLegend wrote:shit this beat is fucking dope, you made it? if so you should hook me up with a beathahaha... okay your flow was good but to me your delivery was a little off, you sounded a little..... i dont know, plain? you should try doing ad-libs so that your vocals sound stronger
Sterotype held his up on this song aswell, his verses were good.... all together this is a good song, 4.5/5



Big Ax-D wrote:Tr collab???.... who is Stereotype lmao?
I loved this song



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