Explicit - Hard Liquor

[Tranquil]

Old and not worthy lol

[Scrubz]

Blah, limelinx don't work on my iPhone any other host? Or YouTube? In the mean time feed me please; viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107452
Once I get home from work in the am I will take a listen on the computer.

[youngfire420]

Dope man! I felt the flow was weird at the end of lines at points. It kinda seemed like you meant to do it that way though, so its all cool. It was just how you kinda pronounced the words in like two's. But the lyrics were pretty cool too for just a small song. I liked it. 4/5.

[Tranquil]

Dope man! I felt the flow was weird at the end of lines at points. It kinda seemed like you meant to do it that way though, so its all cool. It was just how you kinda pronounced the words in like two's. But the lyrics were pretty cool too for just a small song. I liked it. 4/5.

thanks man, and yeah i ment doing the stay at the end i appreciate you dropping bye and listening & leaving feed

[Scrubz]

Flow was really good man, wish this was an actual song lol. Looking forward to working with you!

[Tranquil]

Flow was really good man, wish this was an actual song lol. Looking forward to working with you!

thanks man, looking forward to it aswell.... come on guys feed this shit, 60 something views and 2 feeds

[B.A.D.]

thats a Dre beat, I like it... what song is it from??

yeah, youre definitively improving by the day. the lyrics are a step up, but you still need to add the crazyness into it, like get some insane inner-multis going, use a breaking letter, alternate rhymes, stuff like that, give the listeners a gasp of "wowness" lol

the flow is a major improvement as well, same as the quality, this sounds better, u bought a new mic??

good job man

[Tranquil]

thats a Dre beat, I like it... what song is it from??

yeah, youre definitively improving by the day. the lyrics are a step up, but you still need to add the crazyness into it, like get some insane inner-multis going, use a breaking letter, alternate rhymes, stuff like that, give the listeners a gasp of "wowness" lol

the flow is a major improvement as well, same as the quality, this sounds better, u bought a new mic??

good job man

hell yeah man, im saving all that inner-multis and shit for me mixtape

and nah i havnt brought a new mic yet, still the same old one but i found i different way of mixing so it sounds better

thanks for giving me feed man

[Mr. Chambers]

flow was pretty decent tho it still needs alot of work. smoothing over. delivery was cool. lyrics were okish, but wasn't nothing awesome but i like the topic. i just think you coulda made it something a lil more. it was too short and lyric/content wise...it was just kinda there...you know?

keep it up tho your improving.

[Tranquil]

flow was pretty decent tho it still needs alot of work. smoothing over. delivery was cool. lyrics were okish, but wasn't nothing awesome but i like the topic. i just think you coulda made it something a lil more. it was too short and lyric/content wise...it was just kinda there...you know?

keep it up tho your improving.

yeah man i know that it was too short, i just wanted to drop some little shit before i get into the full song shit

thanks for leaving feed bro

[Mr. Chambers]

Change your rap name too lol. I've seen like 8 different explicits since I started doing rap forums

[Tranquil]

Change your rap name too lol. I've seen like 8 different explicits since I started doing rap forums

for real? i havnt seen one

[classthe_king]

Pretty boring song tbh, nothing was bad but nothing stood out as being good either. Keep working though, you're improving.

[WesTMusiK]

Damn, homie. This shit is fuckin' ill! The flow was a little weird but not bad at all. The lyrics were good but sometimes it felt like you lead on how many syllables you were going to rhyme and then you just completely thrashed it.

Other than that .. DAMN, it's dope.

[Tranquil]

@classthe_king, thanks for dropping bye man
@WesTMusiK, thanks man