New WesT Track! DEEP SHIT!

[WesTMusiK]

Check out the new song called "Take Me To Die". Let me know what you think, guys! Thanks.

Take Me To Die: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i49aKFjeMmQ&feature=player_embedded

Lyrics:

[Hook x2]

They walk on me until I die
Take me to die so now they’ll come around

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I look up at the clouds and I always wonder now
If my family is proud or if I only dragged them down
I hope I didn't so I'm sittin' here wishin'
That you listen to my bitchin' and accept that what I've written

Is all true and I knew you wouldn't understand
That this dude is blue and is wonderin
If I've wasted my time and have been childish
I've worked so hard but it seems that you're not proud of it

You don't understand that this music keeps me sane
I'd show my rage if it wasn't for this page
Look at what you've made, these panic attacks
Yes I'm manic, infact, I can't stand it, but rap

Has helped me through shit, that nobody can ever patch up
No one can match up, what happend in the past was
So tragic and no you won't patch it
So go and don't back it, my soul is cold that's it

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[Hook x2]

They walk on me until I die
Take me to die so now they’ll come around

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Over the years, I've grown to just mask it
The passion of rappin' is all I have and that's it
To be honest, I don't care if I make it
I just wanna' make a livin' and have the bills paid, it's

All I want, there's nothin' more I can ask for
I wanna' make a livin', that's all that I rap for
But that's something to cease to just grasp
Infact you just laugh when I say just rap

To keep me sane and it drives me up the wall
But I'd be lieing if I say fuck 'em all
'Cause that's something that made me hate me
It's crazy but see, that really phased me

And when you ask if anything is wrong
I say nothing at all but really my stomach falls
And I'm sorry but somebody told me that
If you say it outloud, then it becomes fact

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[Hook x2]

They walk on me until I die
Take me to die so now they’ll come around

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This is the last time I tell you why I'm buggin'
I'm nothin' I thought there was someone who cared but there wasn't
And I'm sorry if I wasted your time
If you hate me it's fine, no one can save me, so bye (x2)

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[Hook x4]

They walk on me until I die
Take me to die so now they’ll come around

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Link of feedback: http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107536&p=1506821#p1506821

[Scrubz]

Good:
Lyrics were dope, good concept too
Flow, slow but on point. Very good
Beat was nice
Hook was decent
production was very clean, but YouTube sucks
Bad:
YouTube lol
Delivery, I know it's a deep track but you sound a oil whipyish. Only thing that tainted this great song.

8/10 good shit, please feed my new tracks

[Tranquil]

wow man

this is the kinda shit im digging at the moment, some deep sad shit..

the lyrics were great for the concept of the song, absolutely loved it!

the flow was also great for the kinda song it is

overall this song is great, 5/5

[WesTMusiK]

Thanks guys! And no doubt, I'll leave some feedback on your shit, Wasunt.

[TheOfficialThomas]

Deep and a dope flow man!

[Steve Spag]

Damn I ain't heard this beat in a longggg while! I did a track to this years ago but never released it.

Great song, your lyrics/flow match the beat very well. I think you could have been more emotion into some of the lines, delivery wise, but for the most part it sounds pretty fresh.

Sorry it took me so long to get back to you, I've been stacked.
Keep it up!