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Scrubz - Self Description

Postby Scrubz » Feb 7th, '11, 07:31

So this is a track i did with my boy on saturday whos pretty new to rappin so im just helpin him out with a booth to record and practice in. That being said i think it came out decent, better than i expected. he did the first verse i did the second. I was focused on perfecting my flow and steping up my rhyme schemes and im pretty please with what came out. Lemme know what you think, please feed i always do. :wave:

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Postby Tranquil » Feb 7th, '11, 09:00

its good that your giving your man a booth and shit to practice, and to be honest his verse was pretty good for a starter, the flow couldve been tightened up a bit, but he will get better and better... as for you, your flow was insane, also your rhyming was pretty good on this aswell, this is a pre good track man :smoking:
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Postby Scrubz » Feb 7th, '11, 19:10

EminemIsLegend wrote:its good that your giving your man a booth and shit to practice, and to be honest his verse was pretty good for a starter, the flow couldve been tightened up a bit, but he will get better and better... as for you, your flow was insane, also your rhyming was pretty good on this aswell, this is a pre good track man :smoking:

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Postby Scrubz » Feb 8th, '11, 14:21

Common guys, 40 views and 1 feed? Seriously? Can't take 2 min out of your day to feed? :shakehead:
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Postby Steve Spag » Feb 9th, '11, 23:39

Sorry it took me a bit to get back to you, I've been stacked.

This track is a pretty good track though, your delivery/flow is very refreshing. You actually sound very similar to a friend of mine.

Lyrics are pretty cool but your pronunciation and flow is what really made this song rock. I really like this beat, whoever produced it did a great job and you matched it pretty well.

Keep it up dude!
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Postby Scrubz » Feb 10th, '11, 00:57

Steve Spag wrote:Sorry it took me a bit to get back to you, I've been stacked.

This track is a pretty good track though, your delivery/flow is very refreshing. You actually sound very similar to a friend of mine.

Lyrics are pretty cool but your pronunciation and flow is what really made this song rock. I really like this beat, whoever produced it did a great job and you matched it pretty well.

Keep it up dude!
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Thank man, and as always I produced the beat! Appreciate your thoughts! I will feed you when u put somthin new out for sure :y:
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Postby B.A.D. » Feb 10th, '11, 01:15

are you scrubz, or is that your mate? and you on the beat?

if that was his first verse, its pretti good man. he feels the flow, nice structured verse, almost great lyrics.... nah, he ain't starting out. its good stuff.... the hook is amazing man, good job, I liked it. second verse lol, very very dope, asshole, he's just starting and you put him to shame with the fast flow.
lol :p

very cool track, something I could be listening to often, I liked it. the beat tho... had its thigns, I didnt like the soft cymbal rides, and the mixing of the beat itself... but I liked the melody and the outro is awsome.

good job man, good job from your dude too :y:
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Postby Scrubz » Feb 10th, '11, 01:28

Big Ax-D wrote:are you scrubz, or is that your mate? and you on the beat?

if that was his first verse, its pretti good man. he feels the flow, nice structured verse, almost great lyrics.... nah, he ain't starting out. its good stuff.... the hook is amazing man, good job, I liked it. second verse lol, very very dope, asshole, he's just starting and you put him to shame with the fast flow.
lol :p

very cool track, something I could be listening to often, I liked it. the beat tho... had its thigns, I didnt like the soft cymbal rides, and the mixing of the beat itself... but I liked the melody and the outro is awsome.

good job man, good job from your dude too :y:

I am scrubz, and i produce all the beats aswell. Try to stay versatile. As for my friend, he's not new new, he just never writes or records enough. I didnt want him to get eaten up here so i figured i'd for warn people but it seems as tho people really feel him, not just me. I tell him all he needs is practice and i think this shows. I let him know i was going with a fast flow and he decided to keep it at his own speed but i think it went together well. thanks for the feed. :y:
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Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 12th, '11, 18:10

First guy was alright, I mean, he wasn't bad but to me he didn't stand out.

Second verse was alot better, the flow kept me intrigued and it was very different.

The first guys rhyming was again, alright. Nothing special, but then again, not bad either.

Second verse had better rhyming and wordplay. It stood out to me atleast.

Overall, good track. The only thing I didn't like was the hook and the effects on it.

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Postby Scrubz » Feb 13th, '11, 14:28

WesTMusiK wrote:First guy was alright, I mean, he wasn't bad but to me he didn't stand out.

Second verse was alot better, the flow kept me intrigued and it was very different.

The first guys rhyming was again, alright. Nothing special, but then again, not bad either.

Second verse had better rhyming and wordplay. It stood out to me atleast.

Overall, good track. The only thing I didn't like was the hook and the effects on it.

4/5. Good shit.

Thanks for the feed, il get u wen u upload!
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Postby mdemaz » Feb 13th, '11, 15:25

Damn Trav...You've been busy..I love how you come out with new music almost every week..It never ceases to amaze me.
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Postby Scrubz » Feb 14th, '11, 01:55

mdemaz wrote:Damn Trav...You've been busy..I love how you come out with new music almost every week..It never ceases to amaze me.

So i take it as u like it ? lol And im in the booth everyday so yeah been very busy, the girl dont like that haha. Movie to come soon prob tomorrow.
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Postby CorrosionCover » Feb 14th, '11, 18:39

Yeah nice song, flow was good (espacially the second verse), enjoyable shit. Your friend was decent and he will surely feel it even more, if you work out some other shit !

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Postby Scrubz » Feb 15th, '11, 15:58

Thanks for the feed er-body!
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Postby StoneyLodge » Feb 19th, '11, 00:26

Song was very enjoyable and I liked the flow.....and you kidna sound liek Eyedea too, definently not a bad thing. :y:
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