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EminemIsLegend wrote:its good that your giving your man a booth and shit to practice, and to be honest his verse was pretty good for a starter, the flow couldve been tightened up a bit, but he will get better and better... as for you, your flow was insane, also your rhyming was pretty good on this aswell, this is a pre good track man
Steve Spag wrote:Sorry it took me a bit to get back to you, I've been stacked.
This track is a pretty good track though, your delivery/flow is very refreshing. You actually sound very similar to a friend of mine.
Lyrics are pretty cool but your pronunciation and flow is what really made this song rock. I really like this beat, whoever produced it did a great job and you matched it pretty well.
Keep it up dude!
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Big Ax-D wrote:are you scrubz, or is that your mate? and you on the beat?
if that was his first verse, its pretti good man. he feels the flow, nice structured verse, almost great lyrics.... nah, he ain't starting out. its good stuff.... the hook is amazing man, good job, I liked it. second verse lol, very very dope, asshole, he's just starting and you put him to shame with the fast flow.
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very cool track, something I could be listening to often, I liked it. the beat tho... had its thigns, I didnt like the soft cymbal rides, and the mixing of the beat itself... but I liked the melody and the outro is awsome.
good job man, good job from your dude too
WesTMusiK wrote:First guy was alright, I mean, he wasn't bad but to me he didn't stand out.
Second verse was alot better, the flow kept me intrigued and it was very different.
The first guys rhyming was again, alright. Nothing special, but then again, not bad either.
Second verse had better rhyming and wordplay. It stood out to me atleast.
Overall, good track. The only thing I didn't like was the hook and the effects on it.
4/5. Good shit.
Just Silver wrote:I think every guy should massage their prostate at least once
mdemaz wrote:Damn Trav...You've been busy..I love how you come out with new music almost every week..It never ceases to amaze me.
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