Sentus- This Means War

[classthe_king]

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In every verse I dominate rap at a constant rate
Any beat I step on gets ate like Jon and Kate
But I'm ignored for rap on the radio stations
Who don't hold a candle to me, now that don't make sense
You were hatin but now I'm hot, karma sucks
My sicker drops are snicker shops, every bar is nuts
When I'm rippin the beat it tends to get crazy
Cause the flow is delivered intense like Indian babies
I'm just with Hip-Hop, tryin to resurrect its soul
And if I'm martyred for this then I accept my role
Some say I'm the kid won't don't act like he cares
But like the Robesons there's something else behind these stairs
I'm light years ahead of the game, imbedded with flames
So once I take control it's never the same
And I laugh at you who think you're a big shot vet
Just cause you got hair don't mean you a Hip-Hop head

I fed WesT's song. I'll go back and get the link if this site will let me I just wanted to get this up while I could

[classthe_king]

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107968

[Steve Spag]

Lyrics are sick but your pronunciation/flow/delivery could have been better in all honesty.
Pretty good for what it is but you've dropped way hotter tracks.

[mdemaz]

Blazing start, then....WTF? 'Cause the flow is delivered intense like Indian babies.'
Oh well.
It was a good few bars man.
Keep it up!

[Scrubz]

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In every verse I dominate rap at a constant rate
Any beat I step on gets ate like Jon and Kate
But I'm ignored for rap on the radio stations
Who don't hold a candle to me, now that don't make sense
You were hatin but now I'm hot, karma sucks
My sicker drops are snicker shops, every bar is nuts
When I'm rippin the beat it tends to get crazy
Cause the flow is delivered intense like Indian babies
I'm just with Hip-Hop, tryin to resurrect its soul
And if I'm martyred for this then I accept my role
Some say I'm the kid won't don't act like he cares
But like the Robesons there's something else behind these stairs
I'm light years ahead of the game, imbedded with flames
So once I take control it's never the same
And I laugh at you who think you're a big shot vet
Just cause you got hair don't mean you a Hip-Hop head

I fed WesT's song. I'll go back and get the link if this site will let me I just wanted to get this up while I could

Why do you keep doing 1 verse songs??? i wanna hear a full song meng! Anyways the lyrics were good, flow was good at most parts, shakey in some. Started off great and kinda got a little flat towards the end. beat was dope and so was the delivery. not bad, but i think you could do better. keep it up.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all the feed guys but I'm not sure why you thought it fell off It had the same punches in the middle and end as it did in the begining

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for all the feed guys but I'm not sure why you thought it fell off It had the same punches in the middle and end as it did in the begining

Nothing was wrong with the punches, it's just the way your delivery was; it just seemed real forced, unnatural. Not hating though, just trying to help.

[classthe_king]

Thanks for all the feed guys but I'm not sure why you thought it fell off It had the same punches in the middle and end as it did in the begining

Nothing was wrong with the punches, it's just the way your delivery was; it just seemed real forced, unnatural. Not hating though, just trying to help.

Nah I wasn't talkin about you, I was talkin to the other guys. I know I need to work on my delivery But a forced delivery is better than a boring monotone delivery so I'm on the right path.

[WakeUpShow]

your flow seems real up and down and choppy like you dont ride beats very well. Lyrics were really good as usual and i really liked the indian babies line.

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for all the feed guys but I'm not sure why you thought it fell off It had the same punches in the middle and end as it did in the begining

Nothing was wrong with the punches, it's just the way your delivery was; it just seemed real forced, unnatural. Not hating though, just trying to help.

Nah I wasn't talkin about you, I was talkin to the other guys. I know I need to work on my delivery But a forced delivery is better than a boring monotone delivery so I'm on the right path.

LOL.

[gutawafang]

Very meaninful lyrics man. The flow is pretty good. Mixing can be better but i think it's good enough. Dope.

[VenomBlackViper]

I'm diggin all the punches in this, specially the snickers and intense ones
Flow was pretty good too, was a little choppy but it went with the beat
Good job

[Mr. Chambers]

I'm not trying to say you bit, but there's 2 lines that are worded very similar to a couple of copy lines if I remember correctly

[classthe_king]

The only thing that's even similar to a Copy line is he said you'll get ate like three after five and even that isn't close at all to whay I said...what are you talking about.

[WesTMusiK]

Very good shit, homie. And yeah your delivery was kind of forced but you said it right. A forced delivery is better than a monotone one.

That indian babies line KILLED me, man, hahaha.

Sometime in the future we should collab if you're up for it.