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MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby StoneyLodge » Feb 18th, '11, 02:20

something I did right quick as a warm up. Feedback would be apprish.
http://mdigs.bandcamp.com/
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Re: MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby WesTMusiK » Feb 18th, '11, 02:53

StoneyLodge wrote:something I did right quick as a warm up. Feedback would be apprish.
http://mdigs.bandcamp.com/


This is alright, I mean, I can't freestyle myself so I really don't have any say, but.

Try to not have so many pauses inbetween your words because that makes the flow fall right off and honestly sound pretty bad. The rhyming was okay for a freestyle, try to throw some multi's in there if you can, I know it's hard but as you keep freestyling, you'll get better.

Not hating, just trying to help, haha. Stay up, homie!
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Re: MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby StoneyLodge » Feb 18th, '11, 03:03

Thank you, much appreciated man. I need to record some written shit, because I dont flow as well on freestyles.
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Re: MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby Scrubz » Feb 18th, '11, 06:28

Meh.. It was okay. To much "uh" for my liking lol. Freestyles are hard so il give u props for not fuckin up really. Flow was all over the place delivery was kinda boring. That beig said I have herd ALOT worse so yeah keep at it homie. I wanna hear a rehearsed song of urs! Feed me if u get a chance. :y:
Oh nd you MUST post a link of feed or ekes they will shut down ur thread. Thems the rules.
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Re: MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby StoneyLodge » Feb 18th, '11, 22:58

Thanks.
And feed?
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Re: MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby Scrubz » Feb 18th, '11, 23:09

StoneyLodge wrote:Thanks.
And feed?

Meaning you have to give feedback to atleast 1(ou should really feed everyone) person per song you post. It helps to keep the lazy assholes in check. Then u simply post the link in which you gave feed to, in ur op. Just look at every other thread here.

You can start by feeding me lolz! viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107691
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Re: MDIGS-uHH(ROOKIE FREESTYLE)

Postby StoneyLodge » Feb 19th, '11, 00:28

Lol alright, makes sense.
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