NEW STEVE SPAG - "Get Lighter" MUST HEAR!

[Steve Spag]

For those who havn't already seen on Facebook....
Here's the first single off the "Get Lighter EP" coming on 4/20, EXCLUSIVELY on iTunes!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bZJuJP01Rd8
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_so ... D=10296195
http://www.reverbnation.com/stevespag



ANY/ALL Feedback Is appreciated!

Link of Feed; viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107993

[Scrubz]

Good shit steve! Liked the flow alot, pretty good beat as well. Hook is catchy as hell. Cant wait to hear the cd.

And im glad your on reverb, shits sick. I fanned you as well!

[Tornado]

Vocals wise, i can't complain, i think just by itself or with another beat it'd been one of my favourite tracks by you. Not only is the beat not my type, it's very dull and boring and drags the track down overall which is a real shame cos everything else is dope

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed guys, sorry you didn't dig the beat Tornado.

Props to McEddie though for the beat, it's a banger in my eyes and I'm proud of him for making it!

[Steve Spag]

1st bump..

Come on you lazy fucks, support the guy who actually supports you and is actually making moves!
Guess a good reputation don't mean shit these days.

[eat_healthy]

my impressions

i love the beat, reminds me of drop the world

i like your flow, i like that your voice has a subtle huskiness/whisper to it

i think if you added vocal layering to your flow/verses it would sound better, or just on certain words to emphasise. if you have already i apologise, must be too subtle for me

i like the eminem reference

chorus is really good, your delivery and your layering

[mceddie]

hey man, i think i already told you what i think. i've stepped up my beat game btw!. just what im wondering is why does the beat sound so compressed, it was alot bassier before. either way, great job man.

[Steve Spag]

Thanks guys, and yeah I dunno McEddie, I think it's just the way it got mastered, no way to get around it, we tried all sorts of things to fix it.

[mdemaz]

You're too funny Steve..
That enema line made me lol..
Awesome beat too.

[Emadyville]

Yeah this beat reminded me of drop the world too right away, not a bad thing tho.

Your flow was good for the most part, I liked how you worked it, but sometimes it seemed really on point and was dope but other times it seemed completely off and I think its just cause of the way you structured your rhymes. What I mean is, the parts that sounded on point where at the end of like a 4 bar set, but it was only really in the first verse. And the very end of that verse was a good example, the last 2 lines sounded great, while the line before it the "up" in "antennas up" was rushed because you had a lot more syllables, and this was noticable in a lot of that verse. After your little pun to start the 2nd verse, after that the flow sounded good again cause you were using less syllables, but from "I'm free now" until the end of the verse was the best you flowed on this and it was dope.

The hook was pretty cool, going slower to offset your verses was good, I wouldn't say it was catchy but you executed it pretty well.

The third verse was well done in terms of the bridge, if you'd call it that, and the transition to the slower part, and that was a great way to end that verse. The same thing I mentioned about flow in the first verse was evident in the bridge as well and only in the second half of it, again cause of syllables. You still executed it well but a few words I couldn't distinguish because of it.

Overall this was a cool track, and honestly, I think the bad parts of the flow I mentioned, sounded worse than it really was because of the beat in terms of volume. Might just be me, but I think something was a little off with the volume, maybe I need to listen with headphones

Good work

[B.A.D.]

the stupid drop the world fl studio sound. I've heard this one 3 songs only today. how fucked up is that? lol

I'm need someone else to let me know if its just me or the quality sounds a little bit empty, like where's the bass and the general building up of the beat and track itself is weirdly mix. I know it might be me, cuz again this is not the first track today that seems like that.

as for the song. what I liked the most about this is that you changed the style a bit, tryied out new things. like you kept the words stretching to a minimum. and it sounds clearer u know, a big step up.
great great job, plus its catchy. nice man, I digged it. The only constructive thing I can tell you is try to smooth out the flow cuz sometimes its not so good u know, like it gets out of pace or something.

great job

LMAO!!!! at the outro.... .com slash steve spag hahaha.



yo, Mind RTF please mate:
viewtopic.php?f=38&t=106109

[classthe_king]

haha I see it's been stuck on 303 for a couple days, what did you do to try and cheat for views?

Anyway, I didn't really like the song that much. Your flow just seemed rushed and awkward to listen to. Lyrics were alright but nothing special. Delivery was...as it always is. Beat wasn't really my style.

[Steve Spag]

haha I see it's been stuck on 303 for a couple days, what did you do to try and cheat for views?

Anyway, I didn't really like the song that much. Your flow just seemed rushed and awkward to listen to. Lyrics were alright but nothing special. Delivery was...as it always is. Beat wasn't really my style.

I didn't, I'm assuming someone else tried fucking with it which I don't really appreciate at all.

I've NEVER cheated on ANY views and it's something I'm EXTREMELY proud of, just gotta make that clear 'cause a lot of fakes in my city do it, and a lot of fakes around the whole world actually; I keeps it real no matter how bad it looks.

But thanks for checking everyone and especially thanks to Daren and Ax for the indepth feed!!

[Steve Spag]

Just got home with a new copy of the track mastered THE RIGHT WAY. I'm keeping the final better sounding version saved for the EP so if you're gonna wanna hear (other than the producer's who helped with the beats) you're gonna have to get it on iTunes on 4/20! You'll be VERY pleased with the new final copy of this song, I hope you all check 'er out!

[Tash8]

second verse was fire, loved it.hook was cool. I didnt' really like the first though, dunno why. just didn't and anyways cool song. nice singing btw lol