Mat Demaz- I'm Recovering

[mdemaz]

The beat is actually an old Rock It Productions beat that will be unavailable to download soon, so I might as well make the most of it.
Yes, I know that I said that I made the beat, but I lied, lol.
Umad?


LOF:
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic. ... 8&t=108003

Lyrics:

Yeah
I can do anything

(Chorus) 2x
Never let it go and never let it leave
living in a dream that's hard to reach
gotta fly higher
nothing can hold you back

sick of feeling like this I'm breaking free
don't really know where this road is taking me
everywhere I turn people seems to be fake and grimy
it's time we find three things we can like and try to be
like a famous rapper is something I keep on striving to reach
even though everyone is trying to keep me away from my dream
I see themes of being a nice g with nikes
this pole of success is too high to see
I'll keep on climbing to reach the peak
enough of the forced multis
I'm gonna be real an stop acting sultry
I'm pulsing these rhymes out of my skull you see
each day that goes by I get invincible
reaching this pinnacle of my skill
people said I didn't have at all glad they will fall
sometimes life is like climbing a mountain and slipping
getting halfway then then ripping and gritting
my teeth regain my form and then never giving in
one day I'll reach the top and then fly into space
with the weigh of the world in my vision
sometimes you just have to move on from your past
try not to think about when you slammed the door fast
no more of hiding behind this mask
I'm shaking because this is straight from the heart
Man maybe we should just

(Chorus) 2x

ever since I started rapping I've had a goal
to be noticed as an intelligent person and not an asshole
sometimes we gotta pass the parcel and move along
groove to the songs I make for you all day long
maybe it's fate haters are wrong
taking this hate and turning it into love that's strong
killing this venom I don't let 'em get the best of me
the rest just flee cause they failed this test with a c
I'm like a teacher learning from myself
instead of putting my hand up I'm going to turn and be
the best and take the rest of this anger and turn it into glee
stop the drugs and smoking tree
stand up and face this world forget my history
I'm a new man now I'm going to let this demon free
make sure all these people are seeing me
I can't put my head around how far I've come
but things are looking up some
took all the ridicule and the pain
now I'm an unstoppable force
I will never be taken down again
I can't be beat in this game
I'm like a god at the moment
and you wack rappers are my slaves
I'm desperate and ready to blow like cocaine
man maybe we should just

(Chorus) 2x

I'm recovering and people hate it debate it
create it as a way to take shit and make hits
but I swear I'm never going to fall off again
pick myself up and don't complain and end up on the hall of fame
this walk of shame for 5 years I won't talk about again
Nothing can stop me
Fuck this verse I got my point across this sea
of hate that people give me
each rhyme I write everyone gotta criticize
I'm getting rid of you guys spiting bars I don't recognize
you reckon I'm nice cause I'm rich now think again guys
I'm still mentally unstable unable to be on some cunts table
ready to die over money dept its funny how things have went
how i turned my life around and shambles to the best
I feel like I can walk into a room now
scream and shatter the 2 windows down
I feel like superman minus the allergy to cryptonite
this feels right I feel like I belong on wax
each song and tracks I squeeze outta my ass
reflects my past and how I'm dealing with crap
I seriously wanna thank everyone for the love
I'm sorry I left..I'm back for good now..
I love everyone
I will never let you down again

(Chorus) 4x

I'm sorry to that girl I left hanging
I'm sorry for everything
I'm a new man
nothing can stop me

[mdemaz]

the beat was actually pretty good, different since what ive heard from you is usually dark, and i liked the hook too, seems like youve also improved your flow since your were spittin a bit faster, the only thing i heard was like you lost your voice at some parts or something like that

feed my new beat?
http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic. ... 0#p1522370

Lol...I actually tripped over while I was rapping..
I seriously was feeling the beat and didn't care..
Feeding now.

[DƎRDYPK]

your quality isn't the best & it sounds like you did this all in one take
but you did the beat some justice regardless
stay up brotha
SWAG

[mdemaz]

Nah it was one take for each verse..
Over 2 days.
I took everyone's advice and put more energy into the verses...Put in more personality into the bars..
So when I lowered my voice it was cause I was talking down at shit that was in my mind etc...

[Scrubz]

Things to work on:
-Your annunciation, you sound as if your mumbling. Try to annunciate better, punch in if you need to.
-Your flow is getting better but it's very choppy, chop-hop. Try to flow your words a little more fluently with the beat.
-I don't know if it's your mic or you mixing, but the quality isn't very good and very low.
-you rhyme scheme is all over the place, form bars to the beat so you can place rhymes in correct spots.
Things I liked:
Delivery was pretty good, you did Put much more emotion in it.
Beat was tight as hell! Who produced it? Hella good
Your subject matter was good I thought it fit. U got swag.

I see progress! Keep taking the next step homie! Keep the swag up

[mdemaz]

Oh it was actually a mass collab for the beat..

Meh..Nothing wrong with the mic...
It's probably the position I'm standing..
I had this issue with a lot of songs.
Small errors I guess because I got my message out.

[Atone]

my favorite so far dude, the lyrics are always your strong part, sometimes it's hard to understand you but still, the music sounds good

[mdemaz]

Thanks for the feed bro..

Everyone should not be shy about being too harsh in there critique either..
I won't come and kill you.

I can take it.

[Atone]

lol, but who ever is harsh to me...i will kill your kids and rape your mom with razer blades tied to my cock

[Xray]

You have a funny voice lol.

[Atone]

You have a funny voice lol.

i thought so to, when i frst heard him months ago i was like wtf, but in time i got used to it, sounds normal to me

[Xray]

You have a funny voice lol.

i thought so to, when i frst heard him months ago i was like wtf, but in time i got used to it, sounds normal to me

Yeah maybe.

His beats are good though, so kudos for that.

[Atone]

oh hell yeah, love his beats, he sent me one on msn the other day but it wouldn't download

[mdemaz]

Lol...I sent you that gay beat...
The one with the finger snap and clap..

[B.A.D.]

hahahaha, damn man, your voice doesnt fit you hahaha. I would imagine you with a dark rough voice. this is like a mind fuck. lmao

the beat is incredible man, you got a talent for that.

about the rapping... hmmm... lol, u need to fix that flow, sounds robotic, even if you are staying on beat u need to stay smooth, instead of monotone just above it, makes it sound like a martian from Mars Attacks!!
maybe change a couple things. like create a style out of you, something unique. try to blend in your image with your voice.

keep at it man.