Bundy, TMB, Terror Mob, Preest Klirx- Backlash Of The Titans

[preest]

This is a new trak that has just dropped, its a promo track that I featured on for Edd Bundys album "The Other Side Of Me" the track is called Backlash Of The Titans, I hope you like it!!!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cpKjChDQiek

thanks to anyone that hears it and comments

link of feedback

viewtopic.php?f=38&t=108160&p=1520102&hilit=preest#p1520102

[preest]

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[B.A.D.]

hey man, your feedback link is from over a week ago, I dont think you are breaking any rule, but thats not the point of it.. the whole point of this shit is to get the feedback flowing from everybody to everybody. help eachother out u know?

anyways

hmm, the song is a bit too long, I like the beat, and the first guy does great, EXTREMELY eminem-ish, but goes good.. .but yeah, every line reminds me more of eminem haha, I dont think that might help him much. the second guy reminds me of Sticcy Z, and his verse is good, creative, but again very eminem-ish hahaha, damn man, but I liked it, the third guy is prolly the best on the track, excelent flow and lyrics, top notch. the next one, I think its you hmm... well, you doin good man, I like it. Different sound from the rest and keeping the flow on spot, great work, and excelent lyrics. oh, no, you are the next one @ me. lol. Hmm, the flow is a bit shacky, the voice is nice. good lyrcs, is good. the last one, hmm, awfull honestly, heavy metal rap lol, and all that energy is keeping him from getting smooth flow on the beat. didnt liked him.

Overall:... not too good for a couple reasons. 1.- quality is good, but the final volume and eq mix is not good. 2.- too long man, specially if people dont know anybody in there is not really that interesting, like for instance, in another forum where people know ya it might be a classic, in another one people wont have a desire to check it you know?, better introduce them one by one by one verse features and get the people familiar with em. you know?
another thing is about the two first guys, too much eminem man, people in the underground dont like that.

on the good things, everybody has a very good lyrical ability, and flow. specially rhw creative guy, I think he was the third one. anyways, great job man. I'm interesting in listening a complete song (meaningfull) of yours.

good job man