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New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Scrubz » Feb 25th, '11, 23:31

Might be on my upcoming E.P, its a back and forth track called East Coast Connection(E.C.C) featuring Rekluse. Pretty self explanatory, Please leave some sort of feedback, as always I will do the same. :smoking:

Check it out on my Reverb page: http://www.reverbnation.com/travisblakeslee
DL: http://hulkshare.com/5zbcl3fvswcs

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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Solace » Feb 26th, '11, 19:19

The beat is so sick lol. You are the guy in the first verse, right? Then Rekluse randomly jumps in lol. The chorus is well done, it's pretty catchy and well written. You guys have a pretty clean quality and mixing, I can't complain on that. Rekluse isn't as good as you, he needs work on his flow. But overall I really enjoyed this track, more so because of your verses but yeah.
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Scrubz » Feb 26th, '11, 19:27

Solace wrote:The beat is so sick lol. You are the guy in the first verse, right? Then Rekluse randomly jumps in lol. The chorus is well done, it's pretty catchy and well written. You guys have a pretty clean quality and mixing, I can't complain on that. Rekluse isn't as good as you, he needs work on his flow. But overall I really enjoyed this track, more so because of your verses but yeah.


I started the first verse he ended it, then he started the second verse and i ended it. Really apreciate the feed man, I'm glad someone could atleast drop some opinions! :happy:
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Vettori » Feb 26th, '11, 21:12

Amazing beat choice....First verse, You need Better voice control. And you need to slow down a bit.
Your lines seem rushed.
And look to make more impactful endings... Some lines aren't powerful enough..>Work on Anunciation.

Qualitys above average...If you recorded it better, and took your time..it would sound much better.
Like ive been telling everyone latly...analyze your lyrics... and when you record try to make it the best you can, this is the time it matters.. It will be around forever..and when you listen back on it in a few years..you'll have no regrets


Second guy, Has a good voice. sounds like he knows what he's doing, but again your impact level isn't great...

your not saying anything overly impressive.

3rd verse.. again just the things you say sometimes aren't amazing. really setup a concious Concept.

I can see you guys doing alot better.


Cool song :D
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Scrubz » Feb 27th, '11, 04:04

Vettori wrote:Amazing beat choice....First verse, You need Better voice control. And you need to slow down a bit.
Your lines seem rushed.
And look to make more impactful endings... Some lines aren't powerful enough..>Work on Anunciation.

Qualitys above average...If you recorded it better, and took your time..it would sound much better.
Like ive been telling everyone latly...analyze your lyrics... and when you record try to make it the best you can, this is the time it matters.. It will be around forever..and when you listen back on it in a few years..you'll have no regrets


Second guy, Has a good voice. sounds like he knows what he's doing, but again your impact level isn't great...

your not saying anything overly impressive.

3rd verse.. again just the things you say sometimes aren't amazing. really setup a concious Concept.

I can see you guys doing alot better.


Cool song :D


From all the criticism its hard for me to believe you think its a cool song lol!! Nah its all good bro i understand/take constructive criticism well, I can agree with alot of what you said and will work on some things. Thank you for takin your time out and feeding, really appreciate it! :worship:
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby B.A.D. » Feb 27th, '11, 04:10

are you verse 1??

damn the beat is nizzeee!, I like the guitarr... you have clean quality and good flow, hmm, short verse.
rekluse is good, I dont like the way he talks though, kinda weird, he has an ok flow, but I think he has the same problem I do with the layovers, too loud and not matching 100%.

your second verse, yeah, better than the other guy. better flow aswell, the only thing I could tell you to improve the technique is try to get a bit of complexity up, make the multi's show themselves, but do not overcrowd your verse with em.

yeah, probably the beat was too fast for you guys, so you kinda rush it up a bit. so try to work on the scheme and structure of the song to make it sound smooth ya know? :unsure:

great job. I loved the hook aswell. :y: :worship:
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Emadyville » Feb 27th, '11, 05:58

First off, beats dope.

Your verse is mad short, flow was good but you it seemed like you weren't pronouncing a lot of words correctly or just not saying them clear enough and it's weird cause it wasn't due to your flow I don't think cause that seemed really on point. Might be due to the quality of the mic cause I know doing it myself versus the shit I recorded at a studio, every word was clear at the studio and at home it just doesn't always sound clear. Rekluse's verse was decent but I liked yours better, his voice or something made it seem sorta off, but his flow was pretty good.

Second verse was good as well, and basically what Ax-D said about I completely agree with for this verse :y:

Hook was cool as well, sounded good, flowed nicely, was simple yet catchy.

Overall this was pretty damn good :y:
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Scrubz » Feb 27th, '11, 23:31

Thanks you two! Really appreciate it :worship:
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Tranquil » Feb 28th, '11, 18:48

I don't know how i managed to miss this, but here we go...

The beat is amazing! Love the guitar :worship:

You had me instantly bobbing my head. Your first verse was better than your second verse by far, the delivery on the second verse kind of differed from the first, but still remained dope :smoking:

Rekluse sounded very nice, his flow was great, nice kinda fast pased and his lyrics were pretty good aswell :8)

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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby WesTMusiK » Mar 1st, '11, 02:18

First verse was pretty dope. Delivery was there and the rhyming was sick.

Second verse, not so much to me anyways. The flow was choppy to me and I grew pretty bored of it quick.

Overall the song was pretty good. The first verse saved it for me, though.

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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Scrubz » Mar 2nd, '11, 23:37

Thanks both of you! Me and rekluse have a few more tracks that will be droping soon, were gonna step it up. Again thanks.
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Jaz » Mar 3rd, '11, 17:56

Not a fan of Rekluse really... Lyrics were okay I guess, but it seems like every now and then he's playing catch up with some lines.. forcing the delivery to get back on beat.

As for scrubz, the rhyme schemes started off pretty simple but got better as it went on. The Delivery and flow are solid for this one though.

The vocals seem to get drowned out at times.
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Mr. Chambers » Mar 4th, '11, 21:07

beat was sick, speaking of where's my other beat?!

i'ma just do a feed for each person.
Scrubz-your delivery is pretty fresh. lyrics were pretty good. Your flow was a lil shakey in some spots...especially in the 1st verse. But it got better as the song went on.

Rekluse-is he new? he sounds like he got a decent hand on what he's doing just needs some more practice. His flow was shakey, but not bad. Same goes for his delivery. Lyrics were ok, but nothing up to par with your verses.

chorus was pretty sick tho. liked the energy of it


now get me my other beat!
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Scrubz » Mar 4th, '11, 21:48

Mr. Chambers wrote:beat was sick, speaking of where's my other beat?!

i'ma just do a feed for each person.
Scrubz-your delivery is pretty fresh. lyrics were pretty good. Your flow was a lil shakey in some spots...especially in the 1st verse. But it got better as the song went on.

Rekluse-is he new? he sounds like he got a decent hand on what he's doing just needs some more practice. His flow was shakey, but not bad. Same goes for his delivery. Lyrics were ok, but nothing up to par with your verses.

chorus was pretty sick tho. liked the energy of it


now get me my other beat!

Haha bro I've been so fucking busy at work, my bad on the beat. I still gotta write up the contract then I will get it to you asap. U got a pay pal account?

As for the feed, thanks. I can agree with what yOu said, I think the flow got better as it went on.
Rekluse is new he actually is my cousin and I produce all his shit. His mic is decent but it's only USB and no pre amp, so that's why the quality is a lil... Ehh.

Thanks for the feed u guys.
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Re: New Scrubz - E.C.C (feat. Rekluse)

Postby Mahmoud48 » Mar 5th, '11, 00:06

i agree with solace how the guy jumps out of no where but i like it
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