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Solace wrote:The beat is so sick lol. You are the guy in the first verse, right? Then Rekluse randomly jumps in lol. The chorus is well done, it's pretty catchy and well written. You guys have a pretty clean quality and mixing, I can't complain on that. Rekluse isn't as good as you, he needs work on his flow. But overall I really enjoyed this track, more so because of your verses but yeah.
Vettori wrote:Amazing beat choice....First verse, You need Better voice control. And you need to slow down a bit.
Your lines seem rushed.
And look to make more impactful endings... Some lines aren't powerful enough..>Work on Anunciation.
Qualitys above average...If you recorded it better, and took your time..it would sound much better.
Like ive been telling everyone latly...analyze your lyrics... and when you record try to make it the best you can, this is the time it matters.. It will be around forever..and when you listen back on it in a few years..you'll have no regrets
Second guy, Has a good voice. sounds like he knows what he's doing, but again your impact level isn't great...
your not saying anything overly impressive.
3rd verse.. again just the things you say sometimes aren't amazing. really setup a concious Concept.
I can see you guys doing alot better.
Cool song
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that
I love you Daren
Mr. Chambers wrote:beat was sick, speaking of where's my other beat?!
i'ma just do a feed for each person.
Scrubz-your delivery is pretty fresh. lyrics were pretty good. Your flow was a lil shakey in some spots...especially in the 1st verse. But it got better as the song went on.
Rekluse-is he new? he sounds like he got a decent hand on what he's doing just needs some more practice. His flow was shakey, but not bad. Same goes for his delivery. Lyrics were ok, but nothing up to par with your verses.
chorus was pretty sick tho. liked the energy of it
now get me my other beat!
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