KoreanNuke Feat. Toksick - "What Do You Know"

[Jaz]

http://www.usershare.net/hmy7do08o2g5/What

I'm on the second verse, KoreanNuke has the rest.

I can drop the lyrics to mine if anyone wants but it's pretty clear I think.

Will return feed upon request.






Link of Feed: viewtopic.php?f=38&t=107993&start=30

[Scrubz]

Your quality wasnt that great. Flow was chopy at parts, delivery was decent. I liked the lyrics, the others guys were good aswell he just punched in a lil to mcuh.
Overall i thought you did decent, i think if the quality gets better along with your flow, and liven up ur delivery a bit, you could put out some sick shit. Keep it up homie, feed my stuff if you get a chance.

-Scrubz

[Vettori]

i didnt like the chorus. add more layers if you are going to try sing.

the "when i look back" part...was cool

his qualitys worse. maybe need reverb.
and your writings not bad, but your delivery needs work.

first guy analyze your lyrics more. and flow

work on making your songs sound more professional...less mistakes

[Mr. Chambers]

i'ma just feed your verse

your flow isn't as good as it usually is. the rhyme scheme is pretty sick, but it just doesn't fit with this beat for some reason. Delivery is cool, but you need to switch it up a lil. Cuz its always kinda just there. You need try a more energized delivery. it'll put you on another level imo. lyrics were pretty sick, but thats never been a problem for you.