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Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 12th, '11, 05:36

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btw: (I was neither high or drunk when I recorded this, I'm just too angry and too inspired atm)

link: http://www.usershare.net/2ak687l2g6hq/S ... 20Ride.mp3

lyrics:

(verse 1)
Just yesterday they found you dead mayne
I guess it translates to, don't fuck with me
see just to play, I place head on boat sails
pretend I'ma pirate, arrrgh.. so lets set sail
Mate, silence up, Don't mention me sailor
Just cuz I flamed the century flavour
don't mean I'm saying you safe from me baby
Pray youre not the pray of my next "brave up"
and so far were good, cool... so immature
cuz I rhyme school with fool... so insecure
but I can be the predator, competitor for sure
new senator, american don't fuck with me this year
this latitudes keep chaning with movements of the sun
we're fucking lost nigga... moments of this song
where I guess its so dramatic to be a pirate
waves so damn high, Neptune's a tirant...

(hook)
Sit Tight, Enjoy the Ride
tonight we gon' fly fly fly
(Dont you know I'm so crazy nigga I'm)
so loco... (oco) x4
Strap on your seatbelts... or... hang on to something
beacuse this motherfucking boat be rockin'

(Verse 2)
Let me tell you a story, when I was young I
accientally put a bullet on this gun and I
shot this dude on the street, midning his business
but I found it fun, shit... now see who disses
me.... now that they know how crazy I be
they'll see, its just traumatic to be psychopatic
a maniac that is an asmathic and smokes
and sinks the titanic.. then chokes... Big Ax-D
of course....

dont know what I am or what I do in this course
silk come out of my head, like poisonous spores
bring the noise in this forest... oooohh ooohhh... horrors
and remember I'm a boogeyman too... a maurer.. so
let me go now and choose your words wisely...
Ax-D will take you down... so nicely...
so classy... precisely... ironically... like a Mexican might see...
why u feisty?

(hook)
Sit Tight, Enjoy the Ride
tonight we gon' fly fly fly
(Dont you know I'm so crazy nigga I'm)
so loco... (oco) x4
Strap on your seatbelts... or... hang on to something
beacuse this motherfucking boat be rockin'
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 12th, '11, 06:05

Last edited by B.A.D. on Mar 13th, '11, 07:23, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby Vettori » Mar 12th, '11, 07:20

Lol intro was cool, Flow was interesting. I can tell your comfortable, but theres something about the way you say things i'm not big on. You make alot of songs so i like your passion. hmm make songs with less syllables. I want to hear a slower tempo (not love) haha type track, Would be interesting. Not your best song..I can tell you experiment alot...
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby Tranquil » Mar 12th, '11, 07:41

This was interesting, different. I liked the flow and the lyrics were pretty good aswell. Your delivery is what made the song man :worship: I taking it that you produced the beat? :p Its dope man, defiantly going onto my iPod mayne :8)
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby CorrosionCover » Mar 12th, '11, 09:22

Great ! I'm diggin' this psycho flow, shame you haven't done a third verse xD. The hook was strange but looks like you managed to make it enjoyable.

8/10 :y:
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby Scrubz » Mar 12th, '11, 16:30

Shit was sick bro. You really captured the essence of the entire song with you voice. Lyrics were pretty good, flow was tight. beat was baggin, Great stuff man.
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby Steve Spag » Mar 12th, '11, 19:45

Pretty decent track man, although I felt at some parts you were trying to fit too many words into your lines which kind of threw the flow off a little, but that was mainly for the first verse. Second verse was much better on this aspect. The beat is pretty sick and you ride it nice, really unique track, as usual.

Keep it up bro!
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 13th, '11, 05:59

whoa hahaha, thanks to everybody for the comments and feed

I'm glad ya'll like it, this song, I wrote it and recorded it in Anger, so that might have something to do with the delivery and style haha...

thanks again to everyone for the comments. :worship: :worship: :worship:
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby M15HKA » Mar 13th, '11, 14:01

this is different :laughing: didn't like it at the beginning but then it gets good when you pick it up a bit :y: :y: :y: :y: :y: I enjoyed it bro you did a good job.
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 13th, '11, 16:58

thanks bro, I appreciate that :worship: :worship: haha
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby _Ironic_ » Mar 22nd, '11, 21:34

peepin


your quality has gotten pretty damn good... I like your voice on this track..it's different, and unique, and enjoyable..my only prob with this song is your not really rappin, it's mostly talking in a fast rhyming style...some of the delivery was rushed and didn't sound right...some of it sounded cool, but it was all mixed together unproperly. I couldn't tell when one bar started and another ended, so the flow needs some work as well..

overall I like it for how different it is, 7/10
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby Jay Tunes » Mar 22nd, '11, 22:38

your flow/delivery was very different in this song... but i actually enjoyed it...
your lyrics were pretty damn good too, actually had pictures in my head while listening.
pretty nice song dude, one of the few i actually download :y:
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby BILI » Mar 28th, '11, 01:17

I love it man...awesome joint,love your flow,beat is awesome.Keep it up,you`re my fav TR artist :y:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OszF__i_Fo0 :D
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Re: Sit Tight, Enjoy The Ride

Postby B.A.D. » Mar 28th, '11, 04:59

haha thanks to all, I appreciate your feedback :worship: :worship:

thanks Ronic, I'll work on structiring it better :worship: :worship:

billi & hay = :worship: :b: :worship: :b: I'm glad you liked it that much :y:
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